Kyubikn
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this infact maybe a good book, but seeing jun tianyun on every passing paragraph is annoying as fuck. we all know what his name is so u don't have to say it in full every single time. just imagine you are talking with your friend and everytime u mention your friends name (which u do a lot) u address them with their full name....like Leonardo DiCaprio do u like tea?, Leonardo DiCaprio how was your day?, Leonardo DiCaprio u look good today...u get what I mena
tho I was super freakin disappointed with later chapters of how shun lost every single game, you've proven yourself to be a good writer. so will try your new fic for sure, hopefully it won't end in a similar fashion to your knb fic.
60... sheesh...I couldn't read it past 10 😬