StarInTheNight

That's why I hate this kind of novel -_- , wasting time and throwing all the good things cause it's useless if he didn't get anything and done something in the past , I don't understand what kind of brain circuit u did to make him born in the past just to get humiliation and got nerf just for your novel to be hated and making this novel longer ? Why making fanfic if u give him imaginary enemy it's better if this is crossover than making enemy that's more powerful than him and troll your friends. But GL with this trash novel

It's not because ni lie didn't want to give it to everyone but he left it at library (only at small world tech) and at the start he can't give it to everyone cause they're many spy and he can't control them cause he will leave to upper realm ...

First if he will have relationship with Raiden mei then it will make him love this researcher mei , if u make her(researcher mei) still live and see her friends love with someone look alike herself then it will make them awkward , or if kevil see it them he will think that he is ntr his best friend or he will think that you want to ntr him. You make this complicated with kavin and mei relationship , you should remember this is fanfic. Timeline or something should go to sewer even if there's something important that will happen you should make a history correction or make an oc to replace mei not make thing complicated like this ntr stuff , and the relationship between mei and Kevin in this novel look like forced relationship. First mc is the one that make mei live bright and you just insert kevil like a tumor and this make this novel look ntr. GL with this novel, this novel is not for me , wasting my time , i thing stuff like this will happen many times in the future and you will say "this relationship is important for the future" so goodbye ...

Timeline is nothing if this is fanfic -_- , you just have to make a history correction. If all what you make in history got nothing then why make this novel at this period ...

Still error ...

Who ?

Well he translate it so it's ok

Yes i know right there's mtl of this novel

Nonsese ... God King fuses with mortal ? Is this joke to you 🤣 ...

Chinese young master troops everywhere and dd fanfic without spirit and spirit ring is funny wkwkwk ... And this MC character is weird , every place he visited have Chinese troops