Takeya_Harumi
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Takeya_Harumi4 years agoBerkomentarTBH, I’m pretty sure people here care more whether Bibi Dong is...you know, with the MC.... Poll below 1) yes 2) no 3) yes Yes YESSSSSSSS!
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HahhAhahah!
- Takeya_Harumi4 years agoBerkomentar
How in the world, is a vegetable dish greasy? and delicious?
- Takeya_Harumi4 years agoBerkomentar
This is not what I had in mind when I saw elementalist in the title. Are you sure he’s an elementalist, not a magic warrior instead?
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Just a suggestion. In a desperate situation like this most people if not all, don’t have the capability to think that much. So I suggest you limit describing what the MC is thinking during fights. Specially one that is that sudden and unexpected. Put it this way: How many things can you think of just before you get into a car accident?
- Takeya_Harumi4 years agoBerkomentar
Yank? Dude you need a proof reader or something.
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You mean Tsubaki right?
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Not gonna lie. It feels kinda force how he joined. But whatever...
- Takeya_Harumi4 years agoBerkomentar
Hahaha if only he could barbecue it.
- Takeya_Harumi4 years agoDiterbitkan
Pretty good start but the author started slipping off. Too many plot holes and MC geting dumber by the chapter. Maybe the author is getting pressured. I don’t know. Judge for yourself. FYI, I stop at ch 78