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DaoistEFB

DaoistEFB

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I am, who I am.

2018-04-18 BergabungGlobal
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  • DaoistEFB
    DaoistEFB7mth
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    when I read the summary, I was exited to read this fanfic, because I was expecting him to be a Quincy, which is rare for a bleach fanfic. but then I read the auxillary and realised he would get soul reaper and hollow powers, and I lost most of my interest, though i'm still gonna try and read it.

    [Being rewritten]
    Komik · Cedric_7512
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    DaoistEFB3yr
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    Her

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    Komik · Veoudl
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    DaoistEFB3yr
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    sealed douluo?

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    Komik · Veoudl
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    DaoistEFB3yr
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    that's pretty op

    3. The injured must be willing and has no ill intention towards the user.]
    Hunter X Hunter : The OOP Hero
    Komik · GNaNA
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    DaoistEFB3yr
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    Never tell people you come from another world/dimension.

    I told them about the place I came from. About magic, a little about my occupation as a crown princess and the basic layout of the countries.
    Naruto: The clan that got lost in history
    Komik · mdrm
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    DaoistEFB3yr
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    There are more than 2 who have learned it (Minato's guards).

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    Naruto: The Unwanted Child
    Komik · DustyDog
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    DaoistEFB3yr
    Balas Pork

    And if hit once doing spars, it also dispels.

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    Naruto: The Unwanted Child
    Komik · DustyDog
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    DaoistEFB3yr
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    Maybe, but they're possessing, sot they should still hurt their souls if the one they are possessing is killed.

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    Naruto: The Unwanted Child
    Komik · DustyDog
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    DaoistEFB3yr
    Balas FlowingDaosit

    The curse of paperworks.

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    Naruto: The Unwanted Child
    Komik · DustyDog
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  • DaoistEFB
    DaoistEFB3yr
    Balas shifuufufuuud

    And even then... if someone do this in a fanfic, they should include other ninja villages showing dissatisfaction during the chuunin exams. since having 4 on 1 team is unfair. It is ok as long as it isn't doing exams which break the rules, that the villages agreed on, or they should make it so all teams have 4 members.

    "Team 7 is a special team which comprises of four members including Tan Saito, Naruto Uzumaki, Sasuke Uchiha and Sakura Haruno" Iruka announced.
    NARUTO: BIRTH OF A NEW SAGE
    Komik · Writer77
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  • DaoistEFB
    DaoistEFB3yr
    Balas HappyNinja909

    or both.

    Now, remember, Illumi wasn't trying his hardest to prevent Amon from passing. He knew that even if he succeded in disqualifying Amon, Amon could easily just try again next year. What he was doing could be attributed to wanting to show his dominance as an elder brother over Amon, like 'I can easily fail you if I want Amon' or he just wanted to f*ck with him.
    na yea na yea
    Komik · nightRox
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  • DaoistEFB
    DaoistEFB3yr
    Balas nightRox

    Well in order to do it near instantly, his mind should be able to process it, and that should require a very, very high IQ, but I guess I have no problem with the nerf.

    Did a small nerf for his hiraishin, to use it, he needs to be stationary for a full 2 seconds to use it.
    na yea na yea
    Komik · nightRox
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    DaoistEFB3yr
    Balas DaoistsexGSu

    Maybe, but then those villagers would have been killed by anbu then.

    The man then threw the rock and accurately hit the boy in the head. Crumpling to the ground, Naruto put his hand on the top of his head and notices that the blow had drawn blood.
    Rock Lee the Insane!
    Komik · Haven_of_books
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    DaoistEFB3yr
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    Shouldn't it be hashirama or tobirama, that would make him erase the sould here and now? since it is Madara

    "What's your favorite character in Naruto kid? And at what age would you like to reincarnate into them?" God asked while staring at the kid intently. 'If you pick Orochimaru, I'll erase your soul right here and now.'
    Rock Lee the Insane!
    Komik · Haven_of_books
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    DaoistEFB3yr
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    thats the wrong phrase. here you write Natsu is the reincarnation of Naruto and not the other way around.

    (?): "I'm Natsu Dragneel, The Fairy Tail's Salamander." - He says as he sketches a big smile, which was identical to the blond one. - "And I am your reincarnation."
    Naruto: The Uzumaki Salamander
    Komik · Artchie245
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    DaoistEFB3yr
    Balas DaoistEFB

    but atleast make it so he don't let everyone know he has a lot of dojutsu, and have him switch them in fights.

    "Hmm while my own dojutsu upgrade would be great, I do remember the mangekyo being amazing" He'd say and thought for a few minutes, eventually he tapped the mangekyo sharingan and a notification popped up.
    Reborn: Naruto/Boruto AU
    Komik · Soulof9writers
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  • DaoistEFB
    DaoistEFB3yr
    Balas Soulof9writers

    I think you should have set a max on the amount of dojutsu he could have. which should've 2, 1 for each eye unless your making him 3-eyed (could be hidden with henge since he has the one that makes byakugan unable to see though henge). it makes no sense to be able to use different dojutsu in one eye. he could have all bloodline limits and everything he want, but I think 2 dojutsu should be max. other than that, not a bad story for now.

    "Hmm while my own dojutsu upgrade would be great, I do remember the mangekyo being amazing" He'd say and thought for a few minutes, eventually he tapped the mangekyo sharingan and a notification popped up.
    Reborn: Naruto/Boruto AU
    Komik · Soulof9writers
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    DaoistEFB3yr
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    World travel so dropped... but even thought there was world travel, But I did like the chat system between the worlds, and if he had only traveled to the world to meet those in the chat room I would have accepted it.

    Annihilation Maker DXD
    Komik · Soul_Caliber
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  • DaoistEFB
    DaoistEFB3yr
    Balas ASYURA

    but dunno

    [The Uzumaki are almost an extinct clan now but they were very prominent till the 3rd Ninja war. The Uzumaki's were Senju's distant cousins and great vitality, regeneration, and chakra. Alongside that, there were some bloodline traits that some members were able to exhibit...they were the adamantium chain, Mind's eye of the Kagura, and Healing chakra. You can choose one of the bloodline traits if you choose the Uzumaki Bloodline...]
    The System: Civilian Shinobi
    Komik · Version_401
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    DaoistEFB3yr
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    Healing chakra, might have something to do with biting her and heal,

    [The Uzumaki are almost an extinct clan now but they were very prominent till the 3rd Ninja war. The Uzumaki's were Senju's distant cousins and great vitality, regeneration, and chakra. Alongside that, there were some bloodline traits that some members were able to exhibit...they were the adamantium chain, Mind's eye of the Kagura, and Healing chakra. You can choose one of the bloodline traits if you choose the Uzumaki Bloodline...]
    The System: Civilian Shinobi
    Komik · Version_401
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