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Honestly, it's fun to read. I didn't feel anything stood out besides the main world of Saint Seiya; in fact, I like that part and support what's been done so far. But I miss the exploration, the other facets of the MC. Because from what I've read up to chapter 74, Alex only has the personality of someone who is angry, feels trapped, and tries to be manipulative (work on this part a bit more, author), and I know almost nothing about him. Does he have any hobbies? Is training his hobby? Does he have connections with anyone? Does he care about anyone? This needs to be developed. This lack of personality ends up preventing me from getting more involved with the MC.

Imagine a scene that would make a fantastic opening for Star Wars, the final scene of Rogue One. Imagine you're watching a movie that you believe is about good triumphing over evil (which it is), and the first few minutes are soldiers running, sweating, trembling, and running for their lives, and you, as a spectator, don't see who the enemy is, you only hear the screams, the gunshots, and finally silence. Suddenly, the lights go out and you only hear mechanized breathing. Suddenly, a red blade illuminates the space, revealing Darth Vader, the face of an evil empire. The scene cuts to the soldier's face with the Death Star plans, desperately trying to open the door, and Vader approaching. I got carried away, but I hope you know how to work with that feeling in the text.

It wouldn't work, and I'll tell you why. The Stranger Things series is based on a CIA project called the Montauk Project. This project aimed to see if it was possible to develop supernatural, paranormal, and psychic powers. So, if the MC makes a series based on that and accidentally mentions this project, well, he'll get a visit the next day asking how he knows about it. If you're curious, there are books about it, such as *The Men Who Stare at Goats* and *The Montauk Project: Experiments in Time*.

Good ending, don't worry about what those clueless idiots are saying, because everyone has their principles and a certificate of maturity is knowing how to maintain them in the face of challenges. Besides, since the protagonist probably has some money, he's not dying of despair over this role.

Okay, to begin with, I'd like to emphasize that this is indeed one of the best Douluo Dalu fanfics on the internet, and I'll explain why I think so. To start, I much prefer this mentality of protagonists who try to communicate, who plan their future, who show that the human race isn't just about senseless fighting and killing. Secondly, the author succeeds in maintaining a slow and controlled pace in this fanfic. I believe that the tone of a slower, well-constructed narrative is superior to a more "accelerated" story where a protagonist achieves everything at a tenth of the speed of their predecessors. I don't deny that this style isn't bad, but many authors end up failing in the unfolding of the story, which ends up ruining the immersion and enjoyment for us readers. In short, this is a great fanfic that, at least up to the point I've read, presents a great MC, a good narrative, and finally, a good attempt at world-building. Let's get to the criticisms. First, I think the author needs to work on the secondary characters, especially the gods the protagonist interacts with. I feel the interaction isn't like a more experienced person teaching, but rather some random guy who shows up every now and then to say, "Hey, do this, prepare for this situation, don't eat that, do it this way," and this lack of interaction makes the story seem like just a conquest book instead of a journey. Well, that's all for now, I can't think of anything else. Regarding the future, I don't know what the MC will do, but I would like to point out to the author that, just like the Douluo world, the "venerable demon of the dead wife" created other works that will serve to highlight other worlds and cultivation worlds shown in the fifth Douluo Dalu book (I haven't read it, nor will I. I only know the basics. Screw the damned venerable one for making me hate everything related to Tang San). So I wish you good luck, writer of this fantastic fanfic.

(Google Translate) Wow, it's been a while since I read this novel... about four years ago. I remember being in a history novel frenzy, and this one is a good one. However, like all Chinese novels, it goes through ups and downs, especially when the kingdom is already consolidated, and the novel focuses on other characters, which I found boring. Besides, what a horrible ending to this novel! When I saw it, I remembered the ending, and the Chinese novel stereotype is absolutely right. In short, it's a good novel; it focuses very well on the historical aspect, but I feel like the butterfly effect wasn't well-developed.

It's a good fanfic so far, I say this because Douluo Dalu fanfics routinely end up being very rushed from the middle to the end. Also, what's the raw? Not to discredit the translation, which is ok, but I'd like to read the original.

Unlike other fanfics, this one shows good potential up until its most recent chapter (45). Based on what was said, that the protagonist is manipulative, I didn't get that impression. The impression I got is that he's doing everything he can to climb to the top of the world and wisely using the resource of knowing the events of the original novel. Also, one point that I liked so far, I don't know if it will be different in the future, is that the MC isn't immediately antagonistic towards Xiao Yan, unlike other Douluo Dalu fanfics where you either love or hate Tang San with all your might. Here, I think the MC is on a good path to follow. (But I don't know if in the future he will become a standard Chinese MC.) Google Translator

yes, I also support this idea. since a possible consequence would be PJ hallucinating that he was dying again and thus Maybe it would open space for character development

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