Grimhaven

Hey Suiyan, grats on the new novel. Been awhile. I've actually stopped reading Wisp at around Chapter 900 . It dragged out for too long, lol. I'll promise to reread and finish it.I hope this one isn't as long as wisp, lol. Grats once again and I'm only at chapter 2 on this one, but so far so good.

Cue Doom soundtrack.

Surprise surprise, the MC ruins the novel. Shocking right? This guy lacks common sense, doesn't know how to communicate, and just lost in his own world.It's like having all of Legoland all to yourself but the only thing you create from it is a basic one story, one room house with a flat roof with all of the brick masters standing there waiting for you to ask them questions.Verdict: Dropped

His use of domain is different from what I'm accustomed to. His is more like a lair.

Am I missing something or are the nightmares causing this mental breakdown? Or a combination of 2 traumatized memories nightmares and maybe his White Dragon racial trait? This guy was fine 1 chapter ago, lol.

Very well written and engaging. One of those novels that you can't put down because it's too interesting. I would still recommend this novel even though I have dropped it, just stop at the 400's. 2 major reasons for dropping: 1) It started to become like a DBZ show where at the end of each chapter was a cliffhanger. On top of that, a single mini arc would last at least 10 chapters. The MC would start creating his project for the contest...10 chapters later he finally finishes it and now another 10 chapters of face slapping. 2) The most biggest gripe I have about this novel starts around chapter 450 or so. The author started to turn this novel into a Chinese propaganda statement. So disheartening to see such a good concept for a novel turn into a political agenda. Like I said, I'd still recommend this novel, but stop around chapter 400 or so. Verdict: Dropped.

Anyone know how to read this without the fillers? Like, which chapters can I skip?

Okay, I am here to honor my word. I told the author that would leave an unbiased constructive criticism about this novel if I didn't like it. Clap, clap, clap! Congratulations dear author. I didn't even get past Chapter 31 before I had to drop it. I know you said to read up to Chapter 57, but damn I couldn't handle reading it any longer. Your MC is annoying. His character is someone who I personally would never consider to befriend, much less interact with socially. He's such a child, mentally and emotionally. Very cringy. But that is the best part about this novel. Your characters are real, too real for my taste. When I read, I like to escape, not to be reminded of how most people are not worth talking to because of their shitty character. Next time, dial it down a notch. Write an MC that's readable, not relatable (in a bad way). It's fantasy after all.

Chapter 57 you say? I'll try to slog through it then. I've read the comments and it made me cringe at people complaining about the novel. If you don't like it, then there's no need to be an asshole and vent your frustrations on someone else's hard work and passion. Then I realized, I'm just like them, lol. But I will say this. If it turns out exactly how these morons are complaining about, I'll leave an unbiased constructive criticism instead. That will be my form of support.

It's been awhile since I've done one of these. So here goes. Character design is the one major flaw here which hampers the reading progress. The typical MC mind set with this kind of isekai troupe is so cliche and really frustrating. You know everything that's going to happen, which is the end of the human race, and yet you still choose to go at it alone because you can't trust anyone with this knowledge. So, because of how it's written, you look like an ass clown when you turn down or refuse other people's help, especially those who are stronger than you. The author dazzles us with all of these cool things he can do because of his knowledge, yet leaves us puzzled when he acts like everyone is out to get him because of this knowledge. If that's how you feel, then for f*cks sake, stop showing off and just get on with saving the entire human race by yourself. In short, the verdict is: Dropped