Deathchrno

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This review is until chapter 51. I don’t know if the FF improve after this chapter. I recommend to read until chapter 49 before read the spoiler section. Writing Quality: 4/5 Some grammar error but it fine, I can understand. (I not native English speaker so I have a lot of those mistakes) Stability of Updates: 3/5 There is no visible schedule for updates. Story Development: 4/5 It’s good, sometimes It feel a little faster and you cannot understand what is happening but overall, it fine, most of the times you will have no problems understanding what the MC is doing and how the world is moving. World Background: 4/5 It feels good, I mean, the author makes some changes to fix a character on the story, also he make some original events on the story explain why things are like this. This is the spoiler section… Character Design: 3/5 Most of the character are from the canon or another animes, so don’t expect a lot of original character. Now the problem is… on chapter 49… this is a Before and After for this FF for most of us. I suggests you read till chapter 49 before continue reading because I don’t feel it’s a bad FF. Everything until this chapter was good for this point, means a lot of character development (at least more than other ff I have read) Well… the problem is, in the story the author put 2 characters most of us love, Moka from Rosario+Vampire and Milim from Tensura, there are in the peerage of the MC and everything seems to say both of them will be on the MC’s Harem (yeah, DxD ff without harem is not a DxD ff), but its not like this. Both of them will be in the MC’s son harem… well it could be fine if it’s only Milim (she never goes seriously for the MC) but Moka has another history… When MC “found” Moka she was a baby, so one of the excuses is the MC see Moka as a daughter/sister but the story tells us that Moka was in love with the MC (one side) then MC’s son born and her feelings change like nothing… years of feelings disappears because MC’s son has some potential and good blood... it makes me feels if Moka doesn’t get on a relationship with MC’s son soon he will have a son and she will fall in love with his son because he (the MC’s grandson) has better blood. The point is not that a character we love found another love interest but the story behind it was bad, there is no explanation or development of this change only bad excuses. Also, until this chapter we know nothing of this character except that his is the MC’s son, has a good potential and good blood taste for vampires… is like a heroine from the story goes to a relationship with a mob character. I feel after chapters of development of a character in one chapter everything goes to the trash can and change without reason.