theodore_beamer

it's good I like the original one but the character is a little better here the the original mc. the future of this novel can go anywhere. his got like 3 goal that can be endless or let others pick up without having to change the process of this mc

add black and hispanic women

and Marvel known for collateral damage some movies see the people get to safety but movie logic stop them from leaving the danger zone

if he was 18 I'd say kill him off but not at 15 or if she was a kid to but I can't do dead kids.

now that I think about it his can add some big bucks women to her harem. like she end up in the world with evil spidey and help a sexy nurse or private eye (black/spanish female) that dose good but what to do more.

Dame sent her to a verse where spiderkid was a selfish brat. with no one to guide him. I hope this one get a redemption. if she give someone get the power they better be black/Spanish.

negroide is old school hate try not to use it

he only used the watch 1 time to scan Dumbledore and nothing else up to ch 10. not the troll The phoenix the goriffin Spiders unicorns nothing and there's no reason as to why.

oi just fond out where your from and now know that just ur country's people. when ur told to hate and fight all ur life that just becomes a part of who u r. good luck and I pray 🙏 for u.

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