eccentricbeing18

You want him to have a challenge?? Send him to WORM!! Imagine Viltrum getting the stolen of knowledge of countless amounts of civilizations and it's parallel universes just by hacking Scion and taking the shard network. It'll also show a dark version of the earth with villains outnumbering heroes. Plus having the Queen of Escalation herself as Thragg's apprentice sounds like it's going to be mind-blowing. 😁

Can't read bruh??

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Zamasu is a supreme Kai in all but name in dbs. A creation god. He technically become the richest man in any world since the fuel of his creation powers is his ki. Plus supreme Kais can go anywhere they want with their version of teleportation.

He can make an income writing and drawing comics on the side to support the family.

Please make the mc sing the song "Bad by The Cab" in his world tour to make all the girls pining on him wonder what kind of rock and roll debauchery he's been doing without them. 😁

Something's off. The story's good but it's like his personality traits doesn't match his skill sets. A guy like him who's passive, someone who does not take measures in making no one messes with him or people he cares about will never be passionate in a sports like boxing. People like that are not passive, they either have repressed aggression or a trigger but the mc have no repressed anger nor aggression since you already told his backstory. It's like saying a guy is a genius without exhibiting the traits of a genius. It feels off and artificial...

Please don't include Rei in the harem. Let her have a reverse harem with Hisashi and Takashi. Why? Because she's a one dimensional character with a problematic mindset. Remember, she was in love with Hisashi one moment, a few hours after that she got over him. Hisashi and Takashi's loyalty to the mc have more weight to it than having a problematic woman who might destabilize your MC's harem and/or group.

Reverse Truck-kun??