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Sloth_King21a year agoBerkomentarbut he can literally sense emotions? how can he be dense? it makes no sense
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oooh naughty 🧐
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This is one of the best HP fanfictions available. Love it. Keep up the good work author.
- Sloth_King212 years agoDiterbitkan
It is a fin fiction man. A good quality one at that. Some of it is exaggerated but that's the authors call. Anyway it is a good read. Keep it up
- Sloth_King212 years agoDiterbitkan
The story is pretty great so far.The talent stuff needs to be fleshed out a little better. But other than that pretty good work
- Sloth_King212 years agoBerkomentar
Pakira should already be dead though?
- Sloth_King212 years agoBerkomentar
isn't he so dumb? he has unique Pokemon but he hides his face. Captain obvious
- Sloth_King212 years agoBalas HOS
I agree. The worst is that dumb emotionless personality.
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The first chapter starts with him getting a titjob from Narutos female shadow clone🤢
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The protag/author is very flimsy. The needs are stupid. In the beginning he chose to be a neutral human who had detection magic and barriers yet still got "mistakenly" seen by Azazel and then decided to work for him forgetting all his neutrality. Post which he had his arm destroyed by incinerate anthem even though he had highest level of magic resistance and super intelligence yet he does dumb shit. Post which again he got nerfed by almost becoming the END which he realised later. What a bunch of crap.
