MCoronado

Sorry to say this but a sorcerer supreme that it’s not human plus the confusing timeline (that could be AU), I think I’m gonna drop this

I personally liked more when it was 2, but yes it’s enough Besides maybe a better description of the NP, I also prefer for you to focus on the story. I guess most of the cost of the NP goes to the buff Maybe just give him the mind eye or clairvoyance skill instead of putting it in the np, looks weird. Thanks for the hard work!!

Will do!

Not really. Many servants actually have 2 np and more than one has more than that like Perseus, Achilles and unnamed non-Hassan.

If he becomes an Admiral the Marines and world government should have access to his ship so his tech, or no? Again I think this beats the low key approach that he wanted

Mmm as far as I understand the skill charisma works as a buff (in fgo increase the attack of allies). The np I meant was something that gives the opponent a debuff, like lowering luck.

Considering that Charles has the look of a child maybe something related with that? Childlike charisma or something?? Or an item that looks like a toy but with interesting auxiliary ability like lowering the luck of the enemy?

Better!!

He will accept having his freedom restricted? And making the world knowing he exist??

Author!! I apologize, I actually meant the template of the heroic spirit itself. It still to early to comment the personality of your MC When you included the stats of Charles the first and only thought I had was “boring”. Maybe because it looks just like a weaker Artoria which is one of my least favorites characters (or most hated?), or maybe because it’s just a saber (my most hated class). I like the idea of the story (specially when I’m actually addicted to fgo), but there was nothing unique or interesting in the heroic spirit besides the background. Just a sword user whose np can heal Nevertheless I will still read for now the story so thanks for you efforts