Sach_Official
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apologizes for the turn off. I'm still trying my best to write that in a flow. Of course, this is the first time I become a writer. So apologizes for those dumb blunders. I will opt in rewriting once I have enough funding on it. I mean, I could do all of those, but it will burn myself out too much If I had to do both rewriting and releasing. again, thank you for the visit. It's really a honor to know that there is a feedback to know at last :D
hmm, as a fellow readers (yes, I'm a huge bingie reader too despite being an author!) I would say some things here. Not as an author, but as a reader myself who love to craving for some brain food in the midnight! - Try not to overusing words "The" and "," punctuation. It was pretty messy when you are using those two too much. - Avoid dumping information in bracket, it was a huge turn off for many readers. Good thing that I'm a readers who used with MTL, so this is not a big deal for me, but may be a huge deal for many readers. Example: ...... where human and monos (....)-> you can discard this info in the bracket. Maybe you can replace it with .....where the human and the unique being with some superb abilities named monos who ..... or second option, you can just continue without those explanation and save the info later in aux chapters (most of my fav book has this one!) grammar side, I won't comment much since I have no rights to comment this as I'm not a good grammar checker as well. Hope it could help and cheers buddy, welcome to the writing club of WN!
Author Advisory Currently the co-author is having a serious illness. So, this book will be paused for a time being until the further notice. To be honest, this works can't be done perfectly without her help. So, please wait until she's recovered. Time takes may be taken in a pretty long time as the illness was pretty serious, may be 1-2 months ahead. Apologize in advance
erm..... *run away
well buddy, the truth is. I don't even have enough resources to have a consultant or an editor. It costs like 200-300$/month, while I'm starting here without any resources. So yeah, sorry for the confusion, I will talk to the recruited editor once I could afford one.
thanks for the correction! sorry for not replying recently.