BloodCleaver

How could it be 4 years in the future, when in just 3 years they'll be facing Muzan? Please sort out your timeline. I feel like it's been quite jumbled throughout most of this story. There's decently concrete info to work from when it comes to timelines for this series, except when certain people became Hashiras.

I guess my entire view on this could be for naught if that demon is Hantengu, though... I doubt it is, however, considering he has black hair, not white. If it is though... ignore me. Honestly, ignore me anyways. I'm just salty [img=angry]

This is unparalleled talent? You realize that there were kids in canon who killed the first demons they encountered, right? What a joke. Don't advertise for something just to not deliver. Could have just said he had special eyes and future knowledge. Talent wise, he definitely isn't on the level of the likes of Sanemi, and definitely not Muichiro.

Well, I'll come back to this eventually. I don't like how these 2 chapters went at all. Maybe for a different MC, but not yours. Good luck.

With most MCs, this would have been a good chapter. With your MC though, it wasn't. This wasn't something he needed. He knows what level he needs to get to, much better than anyone else around him. He may have some pride in his abilities, but he isn't arrogant, he isn't complacent. Overall, this chapter was completely unnecessary and felt forced. I believe you only did this chapter to prevent people from crying over him possibly being a Gary Stu.

Only one person has a pass to wear actual boots in the Narutoverse...

It's overused.