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It's not wrong. The author alternates between present and past tense in the novel. Every sentence should be past tense.

Please keep the workout details vague! This whole gym experience seems incredibly unbelievable to me. No way a personal trainer gives advice and behaves like that.

lived*, tended*

Why does webnovel remove paragraphs?? Makes it way less legible. There was supposed to be a paragraph, where there is currently a missing space.

Not a bad novel for webnovel standards. I had to drop it though because I really can't warm up to the main character. He is an absolute simp/creep and a lot of stuff is way to cringe for my taste.

I hate this pseudo science

It's a mess. It has horrible grammar, even for webnovel "standards". It also reads like something that is written by an elementary school kid.Author is too cheap to get a proofreader or fix any errors.This is especially disappointing since the premise of the story (even though it's not even original) seems like the kind of thing I would enjoy.Also makes one wonder about the 4 stars in writing quality. Are there so many fake reviews or are people on webnovel just so numb to this kind of grammar/bad story writing?

Why is everyone so negative? I think the story is quite nice so far, especially compared to other stories on webnovel. Also doesn't feel like a huge info dump or anything.

This sounds horribly unnatural because of the "by the way". It should also end with a '?' since it is a question.