Mastermind

why wasnt Lingjian River saved? Mr. Liang isnt interested in the Golden Body rune? if not for himself, his women can use it for defense. wasted opportunity

why didnt he saved him??? he didnt want the Golden Body rune????

wrong math

so far so good. nice pace, although sometimes it jumps, and some scenes can be expounded more or given more importance, but overall, a very good novel

plot holes are fine. it is present in all novels

will there be Protoss and Zerg representatives too? will we also see a Battlecruiser latter?

Suga

the last paragraph is brilliant move

why start with an AK-47 and then go with Gatling. should have started with a revolver then with a colt 45 pistol

not my precious, pls no