ViciousHandler

Trash, MC is portray to be a nice guy to the point of retardation. Cant relate or understand. System is somewhat lame also. The force plots are soo lame. Super rich family got child swap at birth? How? Do they share room with normal people? Does the mothers and father want to seethe child (heir) after birth? Do they not have their own private ward? Do hey not have guards for being so rich?? Does the Chinese not have Child Protection Services? No one question why kid keeps running away or check his physical and mental health? Too much extreme crap and reactions of the results are as if every thing is normal. Dunno if this is just some chinese shit or if it’s just the author lames plot holes.

Too much Chinese BS for a HP FanFic. Gonna stop, drop and delete. Was a decent run to pass time while looking for something to read.

TRASH! Thought this is an ROTK Fic but was wrong. Gonna stop and delete. Too messy having to jump from ROTK to GOT back and forth. Also depicting 5 year old having sex is just pedophilia behavior. Trash.

I stopped at chapter 7. Can’t read novels like this one, where everyone is so unreasonable and self entitled. From MC to bystanders, everyone is a busybody, know it all, spoiled, and lack of common sense. All the girls act like self righteous bitches, the males like dumb brutes and MC characteristics is just unrealistic and unrelatable. Plots are super forced, like MC for no common sense steals the girls ginseng and eats it just cause he sense the vitality from it the the girl suddenly falls sick and MC healing her on the spot.

Exactly, I held in till chapter 20 but darn it’s hella boring and draggy.

Awesome!! More, more! Harder! HARDER!! - that’s what she said last night!

Fic has good potential but ruined by author making MC to be a hornE douchebag. MC tries to get into the pants of any female he meets regardless of age. And to top that author makes it seems like MC is the most desirable man that all woman females are willing to throw themselves at him like possessed zombies. Like 30 chapters throughout 1-56 is about stupid shit such as MC trying to get laid.

At chapter 13. Gotta drop the story. MC and system too beta. Author trying to make MC tooooo much a good guy.

This is the most retarded MC ever.

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