this book makes no sense it jumps from one emotion to another then it is like he has moods wings and girls just accept it then there is story just jumps from one thing to another to another adding stuff it's not even in the f****** original thing so I'm going to lay down

your story was good until it started always him being a man w**** dude and going after the chicks just meeting them with a couple hours makes no f****** sense at all like seriously he just got in trouble with with the women that he was in a relationship with he's going after more that makes no sense

this book jumps so much

it drags on forever and too many Cliffhangers also a lot of the stuff doesn't make sense sometimes it's like you're jumping from one point to another

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that is impossible to achieve

is this a guy on guy story I have nothing against that just what to know

is this by magaman9

same chapter

it went from being good on the first chapter about him preparing and getting all this stuff and then having memories of his arch nemesis shoved into his head a drastically changed

sounds like it is trying to be mysterious but also kind of annoying about that aspect of it and he acts like

I am at like chapter 456 and the MC is still the same as in no romance and scared of being weak and sill is arrogant and brain dead about everything keeps hinting at that apocalypse is going to happen but never gives a due date for it so on all the book is not really that good I tried to read it to chapter 456 like I said and it just seems like it's a rinse and repeat rinse and repeat of the same thing over and over

story just seems all over the place like you don't know what you're right mind wonders from one star of story to another or you don't have any good story that guidelines

the story is not that good it is so cringy and so forced that it your other story is so much better that has this world's background this one just seems like you are rushing and forcing and don't know what the hell you're right about so yeah sorry I just couldn't get past the chapter 18 then yeah and this this ain't that good

man