Slicer9875

classic DOA.

little blue riding hood. little green riding hood. I couldn't help remembering that.

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typo in title, should be biology. typo damina instead of Damian

The main issue I have is with Lydia. People may not get along and I understand that Lydia is alone, but she misses her status and needs to outnumber someone before attacking. Somehow mc is attracted, but even then when Lydia talks, she always makes herself be in the right. Every person is always on Lydia's side, even the mother of the mc and makes it out to be both of their faults.

when I review, iIthink aboutt how good it is compared to other books, was it good? would i I ever consider rereading it.There are a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes, usually I could tell what the author wanted to say. It breaks immersion because I feel obligated to leave a comment for the author, but I gave up chapter 70, just too many typos, just leaving comments.There was a good twist on the fl. it switched pov to the villain not quite sure what was going on there. usually that is an attempt to give empathy or redemption and I didn't feel like it did either maybe because the villain was crazy.There are also a few things I didn't feel got addressed by the ML creating a logical inconsistency. particularly with how the maids treat ml's daughter.also not sure why fl played her hand so early, it doesn't feel safe and she should be a good parent but she created unnecessary danger for no reason. it wasn't bad but it wasn't particularly great either.

drinksw should be drinks. I think it's time to stop pointing out typos. too tired as they are increasing every chapter. the writing itself is fine. it just distracts from the story.

thatz should be that

the whole sentence needs a rewrite. I get the idea but should be fixed.

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