TheLordOfOrcs

it's be my guest not guess

well first of all writing is pretty good the author should spell check the earlier chapter because they have some grammatical errors. which don't happen in the latter ones. The writing style is a little weird and takes some getting used to. then the story is an emotional rollercoaster I advise to read in burst. honestly the start made it so I couldn't really enjoy the laters one without taking a pause to cool off. honestly I quite hatted the start the ntr really was to much to be honest. I have no Idea why is stuck through that. especially when it happend twice. the character are somewhat weird but it gets somewhat explained why they are that way. though it doesn't really fix everything. world background is well mostly non existent there are some chapters here and there which gives some bits id info. and well as of writing he is still active.

lol they would be forced to split tho. market dominance isn't allowed in almost al countries.

fun things is slave were only abolished bec the south wanted to split while slave were frowned upon in the north they didn't really care. and the north wanted to hold the US together they only later made it a point to end slavery. but that just forced the black people into legal contractual slavery which was even worse. because alot of laws were passed that basically forced you into servitude through contracts or you were going to "jail" and you would be directly "temp hired" to work as a slave in inhuman conditions and if you died they didn't care you were a prisoner they could hire for 3$ dollars a month from the prison. it took a long time until the last real slaves where freed.

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well skill slots are limited so it isn't op but it depends on the amount of skills though

well i gues this really has died im pretty dissapointed i started to read this from when there were only a few chapters. and after a full year of radio silence i think it is time to go out of my library RIP

don't transmigators get gold fingers? i know systems are popular but at least get it right, like most novels only have a system so they can be lazy pieces of shit.

isn' t that 11 points?

its the best novel ive read here in a loooong while. you schould read this novel . while the setting is a litlle strange it also makes it more fun and it is also well writen. the mysticism is done very well for once no over cliche story but something more unique. so i personally hope this one gets chosen. and then gets written properly after wards... not like the others who have great show chapters and after that a huge quality drop.... or if it doesn't get picked another great novel gets buried under the trash thats is 99.9% of novels on here.