Jethro24

What a wasted plot. It’s has been more than 100 chapters and his still so weak what’s the use of the system??? His like cultivating without a system. The title of the novel itself is misleading. He could have gifted his disciples material that can increase cultivation level and dao understanding so he can increase his realm faster but no the author doesn’t want to do that what a plot hole

This plot doesn’t make sense the meeting in heavenly court is happening then he gets trap how will he defeat Ku now. The system is basically worthless since thousands of years yet it still can’t increase his cultivation much their a lot of plot holes happening already First when everybody was trap why did the the master of Lu dao partner have to protect Ku or save his life when they were in danger themselves the author should have let Ku die if you want him to live to fight Lu then he should have used his own life saving stuff not others help just for the sake of the plot it’s very predictable and bad writing

What’s taking him so long to reach 9th level or Immortal realm he has a fucking system he can just give his disciple anything that enhances cultivation without and drawbacks it’s starting to get lazy writing extending the plot for no reason.

The MC is to traumatize for his own good. To many POV. The plot for the MC is bad he has to suffer first then make it his motivation to never repeat the same mistake. A tragic novel.

This is a MTL novel the author should put his source in his bio that he is just translating this novel.

How is he the second strongest. Tobirama is stronger than hiruzen his a fucking trash hokage. Tobirama lives trough an era where children were sent to war. What did Hiruzen experience when he was young. He was protected the purpose of the village was to protect children yet Hiruzen sent them to war the only hokage that did it in history multiple times. Tobirama is a master of a lot of forbidden just you saying he can’t kill hiruzen if both are in their primes.

Ahh another crazy woke piece of shit

Your trash