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The book needs editing. There are so many grammatical errors and pronoun inconsistencies. Even some phrases are getting repeated multiple times. The female lead was so adamant not to talk to her first husband and gave him so many woes and was trying to be a strong independent character but could not stand her ground with her second husband. An all powerful moon goodess whohas the ability to choose and alter her fate resigned herself to the situation and was so helpless to the second husband. It is both ironic, inconsistent and laughable. The other had the time to write abou their past did not give ample time to develop the story.
Story is okay. It just did not make sense when the vampire princess made the sign of the cross before going inside the hospital room where the Alpha King was. I guess the author is a Catholic. Characters was not as in depth. Also characters seems too fragile and easy to manipulate. The characters seems too tame to be supernaturals. I like happy endings so in the end it was okay. Hunter and Selena would be a good next book to explore.