O ı almost forget.. dynamic is good and lovely .but there is smal line in commu and intir.. -Communication betwen characters İntiraction betwen characters (is different thing) -İntiraction ( mc/oc/anti-hero is going shophing and talking vendor for price) -Communication is what you do in family-freind-enemy- worlds key people.vs)dynamic

I iove communication between the family ( family dynamic) ..Refreshing ohh😌😏

More please ı lik this kind story .. but your jumping point need work man . Forest 4 chapter little bir early 5-6-7 .. but whocare ı love it .. introduction of new characters very important so please carefull .. 🤓😇🙃

(My third langue is english) Good very good.. easy to read . I add your novel in my list man.

Only patreon This is a fanfic not someting to pay

Keep up the work man .. İt is good and refreshing .. you need carefull eith it Balance is perfection.

Please re-edit it.. it was so hard to understand the chapter that I had to read it for 3 times to understand completely.

Good work .. 😍😍😍😍

Wating for more..

I like your book man please continue continue continue continue.. I am waiting …

Come back please

Man cone back and contiune this story please

Wating for it to countinue Where are those chapters

Good work man .. Ehen is chapter coming

Powerstone no 1. Waiting for new chapter champ. Hurryyyyyy

Man famnfics are not for money but for fun and popularıty .. write your own nobel not fanfic if you want money .. When writing a novel your own make your fanfic advert/prom./

Thx for chapter

Ff net is not working my region so good job man thank you

Please man do it .. i trust your word .. and thanks for the work.

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