Dog_That_Eat_Flame
Bored and have nothing to do. I just write a story to practice my grammar and to enrich my vocabulary. I'm open minded and can accept some of your request if like my story
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Silver Balls!
Take care of yourself and get some rest. Hope you get well soon.
if it was me, I would wait until she fainted before I rescued her.
you mean this god?
'I' think this kind of info should be dumped somewhere else. It could be used in a chapter where OC further explores his powers, while also leaving us readers engaged in the story to try to figure it out. Just my opinion anyway, you're already doing great.
no, just no.