Quicksilver064

the story to me is a good idea I very much enjoy it, I do agree the interaction between characters would improve the story significantly and maybe some pov of the people in the new village or visiting it and ther thot on it, but altogether I do like the story. thank you

yes please,I like other characters POV it make the characters feel more real. even if it's a small pov like a paragraph prior a few sentences of there thoughts it brings them to life making less as part of the background to the mc.

10/10 with the gamer power I have tried reading others with the same power but end up dropping most of them because they made them really overpowering that it might as well be something else or lopsided by adding stuff that dosen't belong into the world. 10/10 as a naruto fanfiction, from character building to the background were it makes sense to me on how it all is turning out I have read a lot of naruto fanfictions this is definitely a great one. only gave a 4/5 in updates frequency because I'm impatient and want more, but I love the chapter length and how well written it is. so in my opinion a 10 overall