15...

nothing beats the tasty chicken...

it defeats the purpose of them going to the other gantz to train... unless the author is trying to build a bigger harem by merging them later after the invasion after having these clone train the other peoples.

ace trainer?

yup they sure are I once made a comment about it and they deleted it seriously...

just toss him in a whole where the mc is a simp and only picks one girl... save you in stealing girls that the idoits friendzone

any luck with getting castoria in fgo?

the author is pulling a dbz... plz don't

I haven't found a novel that is good to reread, but I do have some that is good for killing time. Most novels here are really clique and repetitive. The moment someone talks about butterfly effects i tend to lose interest in the novel.

I read 50ish chapter so far and feel some what burnt out... I got to say like most people. Cons. 1- to much info dump on stats. 2- to much nerfing. Sorry to say this, but he could have been op and be a chill mc at the same time would have been a good book to read. In your pace type of mc. 3- Continues from the nerfing is your forcing plot. like losing his arm, or forcing him to tank a op hit when he could have stop it. What the point in giving him massive amount of luck. 4- the system is useless... don't know why you gave him a system if you gunna nerf him everytime. Feels like the system = info dumps. Pros. There is only one and that is your writing is readable. In conclusion is your novel worth patron? No. When it be worth it? After you stop nerfing and info dumping your mc. Will you ever read my post probably not, but it will help other people to know what is the problems with this novel. So they don't have to repeatedly saying the same thing everyone else had said about the flaws on this novel.

ok, I just started reading this novel and I gottah say it feels like this is rushed and all over the place... you gottah gently flow the story and not throw it over a 100 ft cliff. if you don't get what I mean always go back and reread this story.

"butterfly effect" because you don't know what to write its an excuse no matter what you said. I have seen the some fanfic that didn't have this so called butterfly effects. the reason I am pointing this out is like what everyone always complain about the same repeat out line over and over again. I read fanfics is because I want to see the creativity of these writers, but if they can't break away from the story then might as well pick up the original and reread it instead. Best example is dc with the alt superman tell me how can they write superman so different with no butterfly effects. it is because the author was creative. in the end I just wanna see the cool stuff these writers can do with the story that the author didn't think of.

it is ok after being transported his iq is in the negative ♾... it sort of like that novel with the rich dude with the system. same cycle each and everytime.

naw it won't happen voldy is a mortal soul that is like a ant infront of a goddess that is millions of year old. Mostly gods and effect gods.

... welp filler...

only when it's the first time between them or something important is going to happen...

thinking like this will get you killed...

if your stuck make a outline of your mc and the people he met and the plots. so you don't always leave plot holes.

imagine a very emo superman who tries to cut himself with kryptonite...