anubis1650

Eye genjutus need eye to eye contact I call bs if he did that he would reveal himself to almost everyone it’s 1 thing if they are alone but in a group no not buying it

Thanks for the chapter and a little disappointed that he really didn't make a difference but he is not at the power level in my opinion to really make a difference. I'm hoping he's going to be able to learn haki on top of his Elden Lord system.

Souna

God, I hope she doesn’t look like her canon self. I’d be hoping more for something like this.

Wouldn’t the Revolution army be preferred for someone like him?

This is just getting stupid at this point. He’s pretty much trying not to kill anybody. They’re all his enemies. Quite a few of them know that he didn’t do anything wrong yet they’re trying to put them back in that hellhole dude this is the guy who butchered pirates who technically did nothing to him yet he sparing these guys. It’s just ridiculous at this point. I could understand not going out of your way to kill some of the grunts, and certainly not sparing the people who knew you were innocent.

Technically he is no longer a prisoner. I’m hoping the class change will happen soon. Don’t ask me why it bothers me to see it. I can’t explain it myself.

I like the concept of the story unfortunately there's quite a few inconsistencies and the main character constantly contradicts himself saying to hide the power that they're building but then in the next second displays it openly this happens multiple times in multiple situations. This is just my personal opinion but I always hate it when an MC eats a devil fruit if he has any kind of true Talent(haki for the win) or super power/system it usually just makes it too op for good reading but that like I said that's probably me It just doesn't make sense for me that in a world where it's at least 75% or more of water eating a devil fruit(death by water) unless you truly need it to be powerful which if you have either of the two you don't

Isn't this Sunrise (Quentyn Martell SI) on fanfiction?? And if it is do you have permission from the author cuz I'm pretty sure Sunset was way before this was posted

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