FujiCigarette

who trauma dumps about a massacre to a little girl? like seriously?

A 2 year old dead fanfic.. had a lot of potential.. it makes me cry finding these 😭

Its late and stuff.. but why does he keep adding patterns to his beam.. why not just focus on speed.. like if he hits a small part of the target its basically immobilizes them he has free hit.. why focus on making patterns in his disk?

Only gripe i have about this is his seemingly infinite energy as he just keeps throwing beam after beam, like... Is he a stamina monster or is the devil fruit just costless? In most fics uaing devil fruit usually eats stamina or physical strength.. what gives??

Is this mtl? If so whats its chinese title?

Discovered this story recently.. so when i saw the update gap, i didnt really feel it.. its like youve been here all the time for me 🤣

How daheck did she guess hes from the future just from describing something from a movie.... where did the leap of logic come from... and i dont even know if shes serious or not... makes the scene feel so ditached... im gonna read a few more chapters.. but im already thinking of dropping this

Hard to trust an author who doesnt even know what rhyme means... you read magus as mei-gos or something? To make it rhyme with psychos?

From 600k to 1.2 billion??? Billion??? Daheck, skipped liked a couple hundred millions there, just seems like too much of a stupid price hike

Continuity is too confusing.. its just one scene from the next.. i cant even picture the scene happening...