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JohnnyKbca

JohnnyKbca

Lv4

Just a Brazilian, who never wrote before, trying to create a good story.PS: Thank god for grammarly

2017-10-26 BergabungBrazil
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Tulisan

5h

membaca

117

Membaca buku-buku

Lencana

7

Momen

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  • JohnnyKbca
    JohnnyKbca2yr
    Balas DeJeL

    I've written this chapter to tell you this chapter has been cancelled. lol I just wanted to give an explanation. Back during the first book, I would sometimes take large stretches of time between one chapter and the other. This time, I'm managing to keep a steady release rate.

    Ch 117 No Chapter Today
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  • JohnnyKbca
    JohnnyKbca3yr
    Balas Loliput

    Sex as in fucking

    How much she missed it. Her family and friends. The dunes, the foods, the sex, always blue skies, sex, their music, sex… Gods, she missed sex.
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  • JohnnyKbca
    JohnnyKbca3yr
    Balas Thereviewer48

    That's how we usually do it here in Brazil, and, from videogames, I thought it was the same everywhere else. I tend to only use commas to separate the dollars from the cents.

    "3.400!"
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  • JohnnyKbca
    JohnnyKbca3yr
    Balas KristineElias

    Thanks for the review. Yeah, writing fast was never my strong suit, especially with job and college taking so much of my time, which is why I'm not able to update as regularly as I'd like. My hope is to graduate from college and one day live from my writing so that I may focus more on my stories.

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  • JohnnyKbca
    JohnnyKbca3yr
    Balas

    Eventually maybe, although John would need to make a name for himself first

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  • JohnnyKbca
    JohnnyKbca3yr
    Balas

    Thanks for the support, it means a lot

    Ch 74 Means To An End (Part 2)
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  • JohnnyKbca
    JohnnyKbca3yr
    Balas

    Yes, gender won't matter all that much to how John deals with enemies, especially in this world where cultivation practically eliminates the strength differences between men and women.

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  • JohnnyKbca
    JohnnyKbca3yr
    Balas

    Sure, ask away.

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  • JohnnyKbca
    JohnnyKbca3yr
    Balas

    Yeah, I didn't let it get to me. He made some fair points but, overral, he justed wanted to bash my work because I left a bad on his book.

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  • JohnnyKbca
    JohnnyKbca3yr
    Balas KaiserSozzie

    But will she learn of what really happened? One thing is what witnesses saw, while another is what went through John's head.

    "It's fine for now, but he'll need another longer session to heal completely." She stood up from the ground. "In the meantime, I want to know what just happened here."
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  • JohnnyKbca
    JohnnyKbca3yr
    Balas Michael_Crew

    That could also work, although "hinds" isn't wrong. That's another name for a female deer.

    While he took just a couple of minutes to go the first 100 meters, he needed 20 whole minutes to cross the last 100 meters. Not only he had to look for the hinds' blind spots, but he also needed to watch each step for any dry leaves or twigs lying around. Fortunately, the Wind Deers hadn't left yet.
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