SkyApple

Interestimg and mysterious power, good pacing and excellent grammar. I also like the characters who feel realistic and not 1 dimensional.

Better translation on other sites plus ntr'ing the heroine would be stealing her man lmao

"updated for modern audiences"Leylin is edgier and the ai is used either to dumb down explanations or praise Leylin for his genius. More of a reword than rewrite as the plot plays out to the same effects, tho I didn't read to the end but I don't imagine much difference. Whether to read or not depends on which writing style you prefer, original or a webnovel's system™

Truly enjoyed reading the whole thing. I think reading this every time it came out brightened my day. Thank you for a wonderful story!

Are you going to do an epilogue for lara?

Beautiful

Drama >>> fight scenes

Other than her tho, fun story,am enjoying it. However the stakes seem essentially non-existent. mans got a year and now unlimited money to prepare for a normal zombie apocalypse. Plus the gacha thing so he can get superhumans meaning that currently the biggest threats to his life that I can see are the aunt(pulled a gun in a moving vehicle) and maybe greed if he pulls someone too strong out the gacha

MC is supposed to be fairly closed off and distrusting but instantly accepts her and just accepts being treated like a toddler just because if a blood relation that he has had previously zero care for. Its not like she's the instantly likeable type either, having pulled a gun in a moving vehicle(incredibly dumb) sure she hugs him a bit but immediately after starts patronising him. She is the worst thing a character in a story can be: annoying.

By Mr finch, do you mean Argus Filch?