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Ltbutterfly1mthBerkomentarSuccess and mastering something are two very different things.
"Of course! Your first time doing alchemy, and it worked! I remember it took me 2 years of practice to really master it. Yet you, you did it on your first try!" Lu Bo said earnestly.- Ltbutterfly1mthBerkomentar
Then why didn’t he just kill him when he had him by the neck
The colossal meteor accelerated its descent, prompting Long Tian to sprint after Zhang Jun, not entertaining the idea of trying to halt the celestial projectile. - Ltbutterfly1mthBerkomentar
That’s not how it works. Just cause he’s suprised that doesn’t mean he would be so astonished that he loses his grip on his neck.
On the contrary, Zhang Jun seized the opportunity, a cunning grin on his face. Taking advantage of Long Tian's distraction, he successfully broke free and darted away. - Ltbutterfly1mthBerkomentar
This isn’t the kind of dream a 14 year old has. Nobody dreams of such a life.
It wasn't fair. Growing up, Mithras only had one dream: to make the most gorgeous women in the world pay to have sex with him! Yes, while others dreamed of becoming generational athletes, stars and whatnot, Mithras wanted to be a whore—a man-whore that all the beauties of the world would be willing to empty their bank accounts for! - Ltbutterfly2mthBerkomentar
This writng has the grammatical ability and flow as if written by a child
"Too much information for me to give you. You'll figure it out as time goes on," Lauriel replied. - Ltbutterfly2mthBerkomentar
How exactly does one compete for a innate physique
'If word of this got out, it would surely lead to a bloodbath! Especially the Eternal Boundless Body – its value is immeasurable, likely far surpassing that of the entire Starry Abyss Sect. I'm afraid even the mighty figures above the Heavenly Origin realm would risk everything to compete for it!' he reflected. - Ltbutterfly2mthBerkomentar
I hate physiques like this
[Eternal Boundless Body: This unique innate physique possesses the ability to devour and merge with other innate physiques. Its power is currently at the Early stage of the Heavenly Origin realm, as it has not yet absorbed any innate physiques.] - Ltbutterfly2mthBerkomentar
He’s not a protagonist so such things aren’t nearly as important
[Moondust Ring: This Heavenly Origin-level storage artifact offers 10,000 cubic meters of storage space. Emitting no unusual aura or fluctuations, it appears as a mundane object. Additionally, the ring allows the wearer to partially conceal their cultivation base and aura.] - Ltbutterfly2mthBerkomentar
It’s called bad writing
'Is this famous protagonist's halo, the ability to turn misfortune into fortune, really so powerful?' - Ltbutterfly2mthBerkomentar
God I am so tired of reading this same line over and over again
'A villain!? I've transmigrated into a destined-to-be-tragic villain!?' Jiang Chen's thoughts raced in alarm. 'Although I don't know what kind of miserable end awaits me, it must be dreadful!' - Ltbutterfly2mthBalas Deadrule_vivek
Why talk about mythology without knowing anything about it. Zeus in Greek mythology is on par and superior to most primordials along with Hades and Poseidon. Hell in one myth Zeus kills and eats the hearts of three primordials. Greek mythology is different from nearly all others in the fact that the age of a being doesn’t dictate their power. Not to mention Greeks where aware of the fact that the universe goes beyond or world and heavily imply that the gods operate on a cosmic scale.
- Ltbutterfly2mthBerkomentar
Also it’s a pretty stupid assumption to believe that a normal fighter would be a better fighter then archangels.
"Come and get it, brother, I am not afraid of you or anyone, I am after all, your older brother, it will be a shame for me to let you win, so you will have to kill me if you want that throne in peace, and all of us present here know that, that isn't going to happen, because you can't kill me, Satanael, no one can, so why don't you give up your little rebellious charade and accept me as the king here, you've got nothing to lose" Samael said to his brother who looked at him also "I will forget about all these and move on, I might even give you positions to handle, what do you say?" - Ltbutterfly2mthBerkomentar
He went from confused and unaware of what’s happening to completely aware of who he is and what’s happening.
Samael looked at Satanael and knew this was going to be a tough fight if he is not using any of his powers, but he wasn't worried, he knew he could take Satanael and even Michael now, he was not the old Samael, he was a reincarnated soul in Samael, he knew one or two things about fighting from his previous life, due to having occupied this body, he felt his strength has gained an increase compared to when he was in Heaven. - Ltbutterfly2mthBerkomentar
The grammer is garbage and saying sigh is just stupid, honestly in writing you put sigh in parentheses or don’t include it at all.
(I guess this is hell, I never thought I would make Heaven anyway. So this is how hell is, the darkness, the smell of brimstone and the hotness of the place, being here is already giving me regrets, I should have lived a more righteous life back on earth, sigh, I should have listen to my mother) - Ltbutterfly4mthBerkomentar
The writing here is geniuenly terrible
"How do you know about that? Are you trying to spy on Hogwarts or something?" - Ltbutterfly4mthBerkomentar
What is with everyone hating on slytherian. Seriously he is in a completely different version of Harry Potter so walking into this with his childish biases seems foolish.
Sean immediately said forcefully in his heart, "I don't want to go to Slytherin." - Ltbutterfly4mthBerkomentar
Honestly systems need to chill out on game mechanic rewards and focus more on just increasing his natural talent and focusing on him putting in the work.
Echoes of Hermione Granger (Gold): When activated, you will be given 30 minutes of a buff effect. For every five spells you cast, the next spell will be cast silently. For every twenty spells you cast, the next spell will be cast wandless. For every forty spells you cast, the next spell power will be boosted. (The effect can be overlapped) - Ltbutterfly4mthBerkomentar
All I can say is that if the original writer had any sense he wouldn’t try to teach them how to fight like a Witcher cause that is something they aren’t physically capable of.
Ethan, despite the attention, retained his composed appearance. The pure black wizard's robe with gold trim exuded a mysterious and noble aura. His tidy ponytail and unexpectedly youthful, handsome face, coupled with cat-like amber eyes, endowed him with an enigmatic charm.