I_Am_Immortal

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They mainly deals goods in large quantities. So most of their customers were shopkeepers. Even after they acted little evil, nobody stopped doing their business with them. Because if they did, they would lose large amount of profit. And in their company these two weren't the only merchants. There were large number of other merchants doing business all over the East Blue. So their company wasn't much effected due to their bad reputation. Even though acted evil, it was never over the top. And they always compensated people in some way, who were hurt by them.

You are right. MC was stupid. Even though he came to the One Piece he didn't change his mentality from the earth, happy and peaceful environment of village also helped in this. Even though he knew dangers, he ignored them, He thought he could spend his whole life peacefully in village. This makes MC stupid to the extreme. But that's how I wanted present MC to the readers. MC who is stupid, lazy, scum, etc. But who will change himself after the wake up call.

Thanks for the advice, I will try to be detailed as much as possible. I am very grateful for your review, and long reviews are always welcome.

He slapped little girl, but there he perfectly controlled his strength, so she did not receive any damage. To onlookers it looked very hard slap, but it wasn't anything. There she may got emotional damage. Instead of providing her just one time help, they provided her lifetime help. Now her mom is working for EBTC at a very good position. She also received 'worker of the Year' award. They are not hiding their power for their own. They are hiding power for their family. you are right he has conquerors haki, but doesn't mean that he can protect his family from anywhere in the world. Have you not read about cipher pol agents, they one time killed whole town while they were searching for suspects. So it was good thing that they hidden their power. Many people say that this world is not like others, where families get targeted. One Piece world also not much different, here are many such examples. Most direct example is of Yonko, Big Mom. If anyone rejected her invitation to her party, she would send them head of their closest one as a present. So I think it is better to hide their power. As for not changing story, there I have written he can't change the story 'intentionally', if something happens unintentionally it doesn't matter. So don't think there will never be change in the story. In future chapters he will very cleverly circumvate the problem of not changing the story. So I hope your misunderstandings will get cleared from this. I am very grateful that you have taken your time to write this review.

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I just wanted to show that, it isn't easy to awaken conquerors haki. System was also not letting him awaken haki, system was more focusing on his physical parameters. And who said he isn't strong?

Yes, you are right, MC is bad. But I wanted to present him like this. I wanted to make him very unlikable character in his origin story, who is going to change himself after certain incident.

I don't get it, why so many people are against crying. He has gone through such terrible incident, why can't he express his feelings. Is hearts of men are made of stones, can't they get emotional, can't they cry. I believe many of us cry under certain situation, there isn't a limit on age or gender for crying.

I don't get it, why so many people are against crying. He has gone through such terrible incident, why can't he express his feelings. Is hearts of men are made of stones, can't they get emotional, can't they cry. I believe many of us cry under certain situation, there isn't a limit on age or gender for crying.