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bloo7mthDiterbitkanI haven't been on this site in years. All the poisonous stories were too much for me. On a whim, I randomly decided to come back and clicked on the first Eragon Fanfic I saw. And it's.... Actually kinda good? Writing is decent, story is decent, not just following canon. Interesting MC, he's not super OP or anything but he's defo not weak.
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Base Byakugan is way better for Ninja then Base Sharingan imo. See miles ahead and see through walls, what else could you want? If it's in an upfront fight Sharingan will be better but as a Ninja you shouldn't get into an upfront fight to begin with
[Translator's note: 'Total BULLSHIT! Sharingan doesn't come with advantages? If that's the case then it might as well be better to say that the Rinnegan only provides a beautiful color to the eyes!!!! There's a limit to being a humble individual.] - bloo2yrDiterbitkan
You can tell it's amateurish but this is a decent read if you're in the mood for a sign in novel. This guy fleshed out the world a bit, and I do like how the MC isn't COMPLETELY low key with no sense of existence. It does suffer from the typical xianxia failures tho. Brain dead enemies who start killing at the drop of the hat. Entire world uniting against MC just cos. In this world, if some Sect Elder sees a peerless genius who ISN'T the MC, they'll kiss their ass and worship him... If it is the MC tho? They'll go all out to kill him before he grows. Smh. Still tho, fun read. Give it a try.
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William was shocked and quickly withdrew his gaze. His face blushed a little with guilt. He turned around after taking a deep breath and saw that Shirley was still a little angry. He smiled and said, "I'm looking at a beautiful lady. Don't you think so?"detailBurglar System: Stealing Ancient Dragon God Bloodline from the Very StartFantasi · Little Big Brother Zhang - bloo3yrBerkomentar
Redundant powers, check. Ridiculous wish granting god, check. Waste a wish so that you're the only male around to hook up with chicks... yuck.
"Can you change the gender of Kiba, Issei, Gasper and Vali to female? Won't it be a problem? That their names are Yuuto Kiba = Izumi Kiba, Hyoudou Issei = Hyoudou Sara, Gasper Vladi = Gaspie Vladi and Vali Lucifer = Valery Lucifer " - bloo3yrBerkomentar
this is so cringey. WHO TALKS LIKE THAT. He sounds like one of those arrogant young masters. uhgh
"The rumors I'd heard about your beauty did it no justice, Lady Sansa," I brought myself back up, though I held her hand for a second longer as I saw her flush even redder than she had when I winked at her. I felt her pulse skyrocket through contact with her hand and finally let it go when I saw her staring starry eyed up at me, "I'm in awe at it," I frankly told her, only flustering her more. - bloo3yrBerkomentar
It's 12 AM and I should be sleeping.... But I just wanted to let the author know this made me LOL. Thank you
When my mother married into House Dustin, my new father said that I will not be his successor. Well jokes on you as you die bro! This didn't change the fact that my mother understood him and even started to fall for the man a bit I think. - bloo3yrBerkomentar
ahhhh cringey name
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I didn't leave a bad review on this, but I read a few of them. I think they made a few pretty good points. I wouldn't give this story a 1 but it's not better than 3 points. The author didn't give the MC any OP cheats.... He just made up a completely new character to hand everything to her and train her (Sakuras Mom). This is just a different version of a system lol. We have silly stuff like the Hokage spying on a little kid training, and the mom apparently being strong enough to scare him. The technical writing here is good but there's so many gaping plot holes that it sucks any enjoyment out of this story.
- bloo3yrBerkomentar
This is silly. They don't care that much about clans. Every kid could potentially be a devastating ninja... Why would they hamper them?
And Sakura is only in that class to seduce Sasuke! Their is no other way that a citizen like her would be in the clan member class normally. 'I'll also have to be in the citizen class. Which also means I'll be taught standard taijutsu.' - bloo3yrBerkomentar
LOL. This dialogue is super silly. Yeah Yang, ur mom was expecting u to do backflips as a child
'We're about the same age but I couldn't even move like that, is that why my mom left me?' Yang thought of darkly while looking down. - bloo3yrBerkomentar
Cool idea to have him reincarnated as Baldur. I am a bit iffy on this though. Why would it "hurt"? He's not actually a child. Or is this gonna be the style of rebirth where his emotions and mentality get matched with his age? I didn't think it was cos he's already thinking about how many wives he's gonna have.... Idk I don't like this selective maturity thing
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This MC is great Lol
"I see." Hisoka took out the pistol that was in his pocket and shot him right between the eyes. His blood splattered onto the - bloo3yrDiterbitkan
I like this. All the weird half japanese nicknames and stuff "iri-kun!!" or whatever is kinda cringey but your plot is awesome. So many times I see people on this site make an MC with cool powers but completely forget the main part of the story.... THE ACTUAL STORY. What you've got so far is really cool, and I hope you continue.
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Don't think this is a good move. I have no issues with being dishonorable, but I think it's far better to be seen as "honorable". Then when you REALLY need to get something done no one will expect you to shank them in the back. This dude was just a bandit. Totally not worth it. Enjoying the story though. Thanks author.
I look into Captain Slate's grey eyes. "I gave no promise of pardon, Captain. I only promised him safe passage out of our camp. He is still a bandit, of which the penalty is death."