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Thank you for pointing that out. I just jumped into the book and the Aux chapter was skipped by the app so I didn’t see it. Thank you for clearing that up. Though I will say it’s really similar and feel like that meme “you can copy my homework, but don’t copy it word for word”. I think if the first chapter was shorter and focused on the character and/or setting more then the second chapter being the first chapter would have made things smoother, but that is hindsight at work

Did you take inspiration from another book? One that has the word slave in it? Cause outside of the setting and the background of the MC, it’s very similar. Was that on purpose or coincidence?

I just got through this book. Why was it dropped!? I wanna keep reading it!

Okay so the story is amazing. No isekai and no super OP power fantasy. It is an amazing concept. The only issue is the grammar. You can easily read through most of it, but afree a few chapters it pulls you out of the story. It feels like someone put it through google yranslate and just dumber everything over without proof reading or editing

No no, this is a duplicate of I have a vision (2) not (3). Though I think this is a place holder chapter maybe. I don’t know. This app went from a place to read books while accumulating stones for free in order to read the bigger books to an app where you have to spend a lot of money to just keep up with your favorite book before the chapters are locked behind even bigger pay walls. I Am reading novels on patreon now cause it’s cheaper than this app

I can’t tell if the reviewer loves the novel or the author. Their wording is so maticulous and so thought provoking that it’s hard to tell

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

I love the author’s notes and edit 😂 I can’t toread what happens

I thought this novel was familiar and I now know why. It’s a ripe off of Long Live Summon. The only difference is the MC doesn’t have copy abilities and slowly evolves and levels up with hard work. This story is very unsatisfying and everything just works out for the MC. There is no reprocessing for using a spell 12 lvls above his own multiple times and seems to have unlimited energy reserves. Also the story feels as though it was just put from pen to paper. Like they wrote “here is a fight. This and this happens. Fights over and done” it’s written as though there was no thought out into it. Like they wanted to write a fight scene, but the scene in real quick and continued with the story so they can return to the fight scene later to add details and never did. This novel feels more like one of those Chinese knock offs or hastily created movie with a similar name as a big box office movie just to make a quick buck

YES! Thank you! I hate how the author just copied Martial World. I was seriously hoping for a good ready, not to get a mnock off of a book that i already read twice before