paja

its good, really, solid story that keeps you engaged and wants more. Nice quality of writing and story develops really well, have some issues with pace of developing his village but thats not great flaw. solid work.

well its a nice story, really nice. at 50 chapters its getting tiring from repeating forgiving for everything and understanding everyone. thats not how emotionally unstable prople takes, mc lives in a tragedy but his charactes is wtitten from objective and obserwatory point whats make it not realistic. second, he knows a plot and he does nothing to change it, everything that he tries to change just backfire on him, becose he is not planing at all. he have a goal yeah but no idea what to do do make it right. its enjoyable read still, and I hope it continues.

thanks for a chapter!

hi author! ia there some progress with works? im waiting for new book :) couldnt help but ask after checking you another time and not seeing any progress, dont give up wirh this pls :)

dont read it, it will save you time and energy for something that is actually worth it.

for me thats cool, new chapters comes in european time like 6pm +/-2 hours depends on country so i think thats nice time

great story we have here, great potential i really like personal chapters about people we usually know from dofferent position than shown here, hope it will not get dropped or lose on quality. thats teally a gem here

thats just pure idiocy, he is famous? nope he is just buffon. there is nothing that makes any sense here

well mostly yup, there is not even 1 novel that i know like that. And to be honest, interacting with world "outside" of streaming can be done without fucking your own ount that is only one person that care about him, its just dont speak to me as succesfull backstory. no matter what reason you will give for that, it just feels wrong, no matter what excuses you will give

well its more of a smut than system novel, there is more chapters about his aunt and problems in family than actual system/streamimg stuff. have a potential, but like most of streamimg novels it just dont live to the expectation, will give it a 3.5 still, for idea and for hope that it will get better later.