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Good fight sequence, much better than most authors and I read it in Spanish, I don't know if it will be in English[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins]

esperaba algo más.

Seriously, how important is the captain in this part of the story? 😮‍💨

It's good, it just needs to polish the dialogues and interactions and not add too many things in a short period of chapters.

Yes, I think the world I create is screwed and I expect a character death for the plot.

................................................It's stressful to read since he joined the navy and I'm leaving it since I wanted to entertain myself and not get stressed out

Enserio que manera de bajar el interés de la gente y meter estupideces en la historia y que huevada de ver almas hace que la historia se vaya a la mrd.😮‍💨😮‍💨