LALMON

"you trash are you courting death. you dare to kidnap a jade beauty in front this young master" would have been a better.

Lets talk about the goods of the ff 1. its a haikyuu ff. 2. its a haikyuu ff and that's about it. Now for the bad 1. Shotacon (aunts thinking about a newborn. u need some help bro) 2. Training. MF is training at the age of 2 I thought the ff was chillin and here this dude is trying harding at the age 2. 3. Very slow start plus short chapters. as of writing this review there are 18chps and he was 7 years of age maybe more since he moved to japan. (Please understand that this review is a personal opinion and do give it a try before skipping. There not many chapters so it doesn't take much time plus not many haikyuu ff out there as well.)

this whole pronoun thing is cringe.

Not a fan of abilities that require luck. anyways it was good while it lasted but this is it for me. I hope the best for the author and his future work.

didn't even realise that was i was reading it as gomu gomuno lol

also his talking like he has feathers on his wings. didn't know dragons had feathers

remember the guy who spent a week or more to avenge a people he didn't know. lol

don't know how to swim, just throw yourself in the river. what could go wrong xD

is this gonna continue. like where she covinently forgets memorable moments. i mean u can forget things but u can also remember. like when she went on the river or swung on the rope.

isn't this a bit dumb though. its like saying your 1m height is different to my 1m height. I'm fine with him being lvl 20 going against lvl100 since in terms of games class and race gives different stats at same level but 1 unit of strength of should be equal to 1 unit of strength.