Webzayne
This platform is honestly terrible. I despise sloppy for-profit novels, they're almost always terrible. Stupid toxic culture of this platform values quantity over quality.
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This needs some editing. Some quotations start, and never end. It gets hard to distinguish the dialogue from the narration. "This is how it should start, and end; when someone is talking." 'This is the standardized notation for how thoughts(Internal Dialogue) are communicated in published stories.' -I'm not quite sure what this is, I think you use it to indicate internal dialogue, but usually, there isn't a closing mark, so...- There's some rough grammar, and poor word choice but it isn't a bad fic.
Eh, there are different kinds of soulbinding, wasn't sure what type you were going for. At least until the second chapter, I suppose.
... A so I mean, what happens if the phone gets stolen? Why not just go for a mental interface?
Yeah, I can't read anymore, this is sickening.