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You Are Mine

Penulis: mockingbird81
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What is You Are Mine

Baca novel You Are Mine yang ditulis oleh penulis mockingbird81 yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. Joseph was her ultimate love and she is willing to do everything for him to love her back. However, he sent her away and broke her heart. Her reputation was ruined and Joseph did not give her a cha...

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Joseph was her ultimate love and she is willing to do everything for him to love her back. However, he sent her away and broke her heart. Her reputation was ruined and Joseph did not give her a chance. Now that he's back and offering a bright future for her, will she give in?

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Sinful Pleasures: Heaven and The Mafia Lord.

Two cops nab a drug lord, who offers them an outrageous bribe to get him off in the late 1980s. One says no, the other says yes, and soon it’s the honest cop who’s kicked off the force in a drug scandal. He was set up by his best friend, the crooked cop, who becomes the drug dealer’s right-hand man and, eventually, a master criminal in his own right. For the honest cop, It's all nothing but tragedy. He takes his family from Italy to start afresh but dies soon after. The family becomes separated when thugs take away the oldest son, Martinez. This eight-year-old boy ends up on the streets, fending for himself. He one day saves a man from getting robbed and he offers Martinez a chance to have a father again. A chance to rebuild himself. Over the next 20 years, the orphan transcends all the pain and trauma of his childhood to transform himself into the perfect sword of vengeance. Now an adult, nothing will get in Martinez's way. Now that he has found out that his father Valentino Rusello Is the mafia Lord of the most vast and cruel underworld business. A secret that was revealed to him because he had no chance for turning back. The same gang In which Rifat the best friend who betrayed his father Is trying to make his. Soon, Martinez begins to rise through the ranks and takes over after his father's death. All is going according to plan… until he runs into Heaven. Heaven is Rifat’s daughter and Martinez's doom. Kemal was the love of her life, and it broke her heart when he disappeared or so she played. Martinez and Heaven meet for the first time in an Alley because of Simon but she doesn't remember as they made her forget about what happened that night but Martinez later finds out that Heaven played a major role In what destroyed his family years ago. She doesn’t recognize the new man at first, but is strangely drawn to him all the same maybe due to the guilt even If she remembers nothing about the past. For the sake of his empire and her safety, He tries to harden his heart, but the spark just won’t die out. Soon their love catches fire, and the bond between them becomes Martinez's greatest obstacle. Can this unbreakable love conquer his thirst for revenge? What happens when the one he Loves the most turns out to be the one he has hated all his life? What would Martinez do when all the arrows to finding his little brother points out to an enemy of his. Rifat's Right hand man. Would he pull the trigger and let the bullets Into the Chest of the one who destroyed his childhood when he finds out she's the Love of his Life? This improbable love story puts Martinez and Heaven on a dangerous path, as the forces of love and revenge transform them both.

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I_love_u_3000
I_love_u_3000Lv4I_love_u_3000

I'm reading this story.. and I'm already addicted by it... Please more update.. story is veeeeeeerrrrrryyy interesting.. I'm loving it very much.. I will support you.. promise...

R123
R123Lv5R123

The story is so interesting..I hope that the author won't drop it because I can't wait to know the rest of its plot and the truth about his mother obsession...

R123
R123Lv5R123

......The story of the novel and its plot is so amazing and interesting.......It's the first time for me to read this type of story about an obsessed mother and her thoughts about her son and her plans to get rid of any girl around him even if it's her daughter but I think it's the reason why this novel took much attention from us .......and wow I am waiting for the updates......please don't be late

midnight_bloom
midnight_bloomLv13midnight_bloom

The story has potential. I find the pace a bit fast, I guess, but definitely, the plot is interesting. But please, please check the grammar and spelling because even at the first chapter, it has lots of typos already. Nevertheless, it can be fixed later. It's just that, it most probably will affect the fluidity of the reading experience. Moreover, I noticed, there is subtle switching of POV's? Please be careful as it might cause unnecessary confusion to the readers. Overall, it's good and keep improving. Thumbs up.

MyCharacterLeads
MyCharacterLeadsLv5MyCharacterLeads

Nice story. 👍 Intriguing plot. Characters were introduced fairly. The cold Joseph, the poor Christine, and the possessive demonic Celine. (That Celine is really getting into my nerves. Urggg!) Story development is quite in pace. 👍 Writing quality needs proofreading. Switching from 1st person to 3rd person was confusing. (Visible around middle chapter) I notice some typos error like 'het' instead of 'her'(forgot the chapter) Confusing and switching of tenses, past and present tense. (Also a problem of mine, haha) And lastly, the use of punctuation mark on a quotation mark. Usually, commas weren't needed after a quotation mark. e.g. "Addddds?" Instead of "Addddds?", (Don't need the commas anymore) Hope it help! 😊 PS. The last chapter improved a lot. Keep writing. 😄

Nzoputa
NzoputaLv4Nzoputa

Author has done a pretty good job with the novel, seeing that its a first novel. The story is interesting and not common, so thats a good thing.Good job author and keep it up.

Bikash2410
Bikash2410Lv2Bikash2410

I love it...The character is well described with her actions and i like your grammar..... I can't wait to read further....do update chapter fast..Good luck and wish you best of luck

MisterE05
MisterE05Lv4MisterE05

It has a few typos and gramatical issues here and there. For example skipping short words to complete a sentence. Such as: "I, Too, Off" Those of course are examples and not directed to the actual story. Point is some words are missing. I reccomend you too use "Google Docs". It has an inbuilt spell check and as for gramatic errors, make sure to read and edit a part a few times before posting. It is beyond helpful. As for the story, i did enjoy it. It has twists that would make even a grown man cry. Keep up the amazing work.

gabbi10192008
gabbi10192008Lv3gabbi10192008

Its different from the other stories i have read so far. I hope the author will cintinue to update it. It got my attention because its kind of fresh

ramaranth
ramaranthLv4ramaranth

Its very interesting. But there was a time that the updates took awhile. The author seems to be new but neverthelesd it has potential. I like it so far.

gabbi10192008
gabbi10192008Lv3gabbi10192008

I like the plot of the story. Although the author is new, the stoyline is clear, detailed and descriptive. I really like it so far. I hope to read more of this.

JSY_Lang
JSY_LangLv1JSY_Lang

Reading this story and get upset with how stupid Joseoh is and how naive the female lead is. when will she fight? anyways, goodjob to the author.

silverbabe
silverbabeLv14silverbabe

The writer has stopped updating for a long time. Its a good story and I will love to read it to the end, but it's sad that there are no new update for a long time

Olu_Maureen
Olu_MaureenLv10Olu_Maureen

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Olu_Maureen
Olu_MaureenLv10Olu_Maureen

I love this story and am still waiting patiently. Pls update the story for us. It's Been long. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Olu_Maureen
Olu_MaureenLv10Olu_Maureen

This is an interesting story line.wow! I love it. It's really entertaining. Am already addicted to it. I couldn't even write chapter comments because I can't wait to read the next chapter,even when I have load of things to write. That is how good am enjoying. Ride on author . You are doing a good job👍😍😋❤️❤️

R123
R123Lv5R123

......The novel is very interesting...... .....It is the first time for me to read this type of story ....It began with a lot of misunderstandings that lead me to read the next chapters to know what had happened to the female lead .... ..And I really can't wait until its next update... .......Thanks for such an enjoyable story...

Lexmine
LexmineLv10Lexmine

Loving novel, still enjoying the novel so far. I know that the author is a little not too fast in updating the chapters but it is really really interesting and loving. Thanks for the novel 💝💖❤

Mlgx_Claa
Mlgx_ClaaLv3Mlgx_Claa

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Lexmine
LexmineLv10Lexmine

Good novel, author please try to bring more chapters I'm really hungry for your books, Everything about the book is okay, and I also like the fact that, the chapters are long. Author keep it up...

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