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Versatile mage fan fiction

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Baca novel Versatile mage fan fiction yang ditulis oleh penulis Kumark01 yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. ...

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petualangan serena dari negeri thresen

Kisah ini mengenai seorang putri sebatangkara yang ingin membalas dendam atas kematian kedua orangtuanya dan ingin membangun kembali Negerinya yang telah dibumi hanguskan oleh seorang raja kejam dari Negeri jauh. Setiap malam rekaman memori tentang desingan pedang, raut wajah kedua orangtuanya, tawa menggelegar raja kejam, bau darah, jeritan rakyat dan kobaran api selalu muncul dengan jelas di benaknya. Dahulu dia putri yang sangat dimanjakan oleh orangtuanya, kini putri itu menjadi seorang Serena pengembara yang ingin balas dendam. Saat kabur dari Negerinya ia pingsan di dalam hutan dan ditemukan oleh panda dan koala. Ia belajar ilmu bela diri dan ilmu bertahan hidup dari pemuda hutan yang tidak lain adalah tuan dari panda dan koala tersebut. Setelah menguasai berbagai hal, ia pun pergi meninggalkan mereka untuk mengembara mencapai tujuannya. Kisah pun dimulai, perjalanan jauh itu tidaklah mudah. Ia harus melewati berbagai hal dalam keadaan apapun. Memori tentang masalalunya selalu setia bersamanya hingga akhir. Ia harus tertangkap oleh bajak laut, bertarung dengan kadal raksasa dan terlibat berbagai peperangan. Namun pemuda hutan selalu datang menolongnya dan membantunya disaat yang tepat. Serena bersama dengan pemuda hutan yang bernama Olin itu berhasil sampai di kerajaan raja kejam tersebut. Mereka mencuri semua informasi dan pergi meminta bantuan kerajaan lain yang lebih kuat. Disana mereka mengikuti kompetisi untuk menjadi ksatria kerajaan dan berhasil menjadi pimpinan Armada Aquila. Perang dengan kerajaan raja kejam itupun terjadi. Peperangan di medan perang membakar api dendam dan semangatnya untuk membunuh semakin bergejolak. Luka tidak lagi terasa sakit, ia terus berperang hingga akhirnya memiliki kesempatan untuk bertarung satu lawan satu dengan raja kejam tersebut. Tiap ayunan pedangnya berisi amarah, kesedihan dan dendam yang mengalir bersama dengan alunan lagu kematian dari masalalunya. Olin sekali lagi menyelamatkan Serena agar tidak tenggelam dalam kegelapan masalalunya. Berkat Olin, Serena bisa menatap kembali masadepan dan hidup bahagia. Setelah itu Olin pun mengungkapkan identitasnya yang sesungguhnya kepada Serena. Serena merasa sangat terkejut dan tidak bisa berkata apapun. Akhirnya Olin mengajak Serena untuk memulai hidup baru bersamanya.

Chocho_Yucho · Fantasi
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3 Chs

Unlove You to Save You

Aaron was trained to be the perfect heir of the Kingdom of Telzina. Sharpened to feel nothing since his mother died, he met Lorelei, the only person who made him feel things. The King was not happy to see that the son he worked so hard for to train fell in love with a person from a low background. In order to teach him a lesson, he ordered men to assault Lorelei in front of Aaron, and they eventually killed her. "Your love did this to her" the King whispered in the ears of his stone-cold son, "I told you to kill all of your emotions". The death of his beloved made him realize that what he felt for her was love. He bowed his head down as tears filled his eyes and he stole a sword from one of the guards and bathed them all in their own blood in an instant. The King looked at the carnage that happened at his back as Aaron beheaded him as slow as possible. "Your death will be painless, but I promise to meet you again." Aaron whispered; his face emotionless. The King couldn't do anything to reply as his head fell on the ground. His crown rolled in Aaron's feet. "My love, I will fix this," he said, his voice broke as he turned to look at the cold body of Lorelei. "But this time, you can't love me. I can't promise you that I won't kill anyone you ever marry, but please do not love me in our next life" Aaron embraced her. He activated the green gem necklace that hung from his neck and whispered to it. "I have to go back. You must follow my orders." And then he came back to 20 years ago...

LoreleiSerenata · Sejarah
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19 Chs

[Casa De Mafamia University] Prison Of Hell

A City who ruled by a Heartless Mayor. A University who ruled by a Cold Badass Captain. A Students who became Soldiers to fight for Humanities. In there young age, they we're trained. Trained to became Devils. Trained to became a Puppet of the Mayor. And to survive, you have to be strong, selfish and have a heart like a stone. "Weaklings have no place in this Hell." _______________________ Wha - what happened? That's the first question that entered my mind after I woke up on my dream. Or should I say .... Nightmare. No. This is not a dream. Not also a nightmare. This is reality. Our mission. What happened to us, to my comrades. Wait! What happened .... To us? I look around. This is .... The battle field. We're in the battle field. "What .... Happend?" I whispered while catching my breath. My eye sight became blurry .... My body hurts like hell that making me dizzy. Aahhh .... It hurts .... "Captain!" Who's that? I forced my eyelids to remain open and find where did that voice came from. Is it a rescuer? "Captain, are you okay?!" He came towards me at kneeled to help me sit. That uniform .... I grab his collar, making him shock. "Are you .... A warrior from Casa De Mafamia?" I asked. "Y - yes, sir! I'm Sargent Rafael Miller! A back-up warrior from 14th Infantry Battalion!" He answered and saluted. I let go of his collar and sat up, and fist my hair. "Tell me. In my team .... How many of them .... Survived?" I asked while my eyes are closed. Shit! "None,sir." His voice are low when he answer my question. I took a deep breath. So .... I'm the only one who left out, huh? Cursed the universe! "Do you feel something, sir?" He asked. "My body ... and head. It hurts." I whispered. "Medical team, over here!" He shouted. But before they arrived, I lost my concious.

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Fantastic_Spirit
Fantastic_SpiritLv14Fantastic_Spirit

Definitely has a lot of potential, considering the fact that not many Versatile Fanfics actually existed. If I may though, I would suggest a simple spell/grammar checker like Google Docs, Microsoft Word, or Grammarly. Google Docs is pretty much free. it would go a long way to attracting more readers and improving your skills as a writer.

Novel_Guru
Novel_GuruLv4Novel_Guru

it would be nice if author expands those first 5 chapter to novel type 40 vhapters.. it is a nice summary story fic thanks for fic author-kun

jess_weston
jess_westonLv4jess_weston

I give you points for it being a rare versatile mage fanfic and that it's readable. The main complaint I have with this is, is that It's just an overview and just lists of facts and plot points of canon events mixed in with your OC. there isn't much of a story to read. No character character development; Your OC design was bare minimum; you didn't try to do anything new. I actually fully read 10 chapters before I called it quits. My hope is that if, and when you do come back to writing, that you can write a proper story. You don't have to re-write this one, you can start something new.

DaoistShadow
DaoistShadowLv4DaoistShadow

Dropped?????????????????????????????????

Aerobix10
Aerobix10Lv4Aerobix10

Great story. Mpre chapters please。◕‿◕。🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺。◕‿◕。[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Aaron_Julian
Aaron_JulianLv2Aaron_Julian

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Daoist4ZZMsF
Daoist4ZZMsFLv1Daoist4ZZMsF

Определенно имеет большой потенциал, учитывая тот факт, что на самом деле существовало не так много универсальных фанфиков. Если позволите, я бы предложил простую проверку орфографии / грамматики, такую как Google Docs, Microsoft Word или Grammarly. Google Docs в значительной степени бесплатный. это будет иметь большое значение для привлечения большего количества читателей и улучшения ваших навыков как писателя

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