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Veerawan

Penulis: Zafer_Awan
Contemporary Romance
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Willy & Chrissy

Will I survive without her? My demons hunt me, am I going to live or not? Should I go back? So many unanswered questions. How could I possibly go back, where would I even start from, but she was my world she was my solar system am I just going to throw all that away? All those bitter sweet memories? Burnt to ash by betrayal. One thing is for sure I'll never be the same after this. After a tragic break up that shatters my cardiac muscle into a thousand microscopic pieces, I decide it's time to stop running away from my past and just accept things as they are, if I'm ever going to live I need to do this, happiness is a drug, I became a drug addict for nearly two years but now that my drug ( Christine) left I'm left to deal with the withdrawals. She drained me, all girls are the same I casually remind myself I'll never trust a single one of them. But maybe just maybe the one at the end is different. The past four years have been really difficult for me, but she moved on like it was nothing, oh how cruel these girls are, she ate my insides and left not a shred of happiness all I see is depression, anxiety, suffering and futility day in day out. After dating for nearly a year and a half it felt like she was the one for William, William thought it would last forever like in the movies but life is a tall glass of dirt and ash, it's here to bite me in the ass. Love is a twisted curse, she will find us all, she will make us all happy but then she will take everything we love and cherish away from us. We will cry and gravel but it won't be returned to us. Sometimes the beauty of something can be seen in it's ugliness. But so far even without her I'm ok aren't I? well let's find out together shall we? Welcome to "Willy and Chrissy"

WilliamMumembe · Masa Muda
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Sinopsis Awal Cerita: Shin Youngwoo memiliki kehidupan yang tidak menguntungkan dan sekarang dirinya terjebak mengangkut batu bata di lokasi konstruksi. Ia bahkan harus menjadi buruh di game VR, Satisfy! Namun, keberuntungan akan segera memasuki kehidupan tanpa harapannya. Karakternya, 'Grid', akan menemukan Gua Ujung Utara untuk Quest, dan di tempat tersebut, ia menemukan 'Buku Langka Pagma' dan menjadi player kelas legendaris. Ulasan Translator: Basis dari novel ini adalah game VR ( Virtual Reality ) yang disebut Satisfy, dikembangkan oleh ilmuwan terbaik di dunia Lim Cheolho dan para ilmuwan terbaik di dunia lainnya. Karakter utamanya dari cerita ini bersifat pemalu, mudah frustasi, penakut, egois, peduli dengan uang dan mudah merasa iri dengan orang lain. Karena sang Author membuat karakter dengan sifat demikian, ceritanya akan sedikit sulit untuk dibaca para reader pada awalnya. Namun, ketika sang tokoh utama bertemu dengan berbagai macam orang dan para jenius, ia secara internal menjadi dewasa dan kepribadiannya berubah. Jika karakter utama digambarkan seperti kanker sejak dini, saat ini ia dapat disebut sebagai orang dewasa yang matang. Namun, bagi para reader yang tidak membaca bagian-bagian awal dari chapter 90 ( atau volume ke-5 ) pastinya akan sulit untuk mempercayai tingkat pengembangan ceritanya. Pengaturan dasar dan alur ceritanya mirip dengan novel-novel VR lainnya, namun yang patut dipuji dari novel ini adalah pengembangan kontennya. Bagian-bagian awalnya tidak jauh berbeda dengan novel-novel lainnya, tapi di peringkat yang baru telah melampaui rata-rata pasar dalam beberapa tahun terakhir karena perkembangan dari penulisnya. Pada awal cerita, game berlangsung dengan sang karakter utama menggunakan kelas dari seorang pandai besi legendaris. Karakter utama memperluas konten game dan tingkat pengguna gamenya meningkat secara dramatis. Bakat tersembunyi, player baru di peringkat resmi, berbagai macam kelas yang dapat merusak keseimbangan game, semua ini menunjukkan bahwa sang tokoh utama tesebut dapat melakukan hal-hal yang mustahil sendirian. Tokoh utama tumbuh secara internal dan eksternal saat bersaing dengan player lainnya. Bahkan, jika reader membandingkan metode pertempuran yang sederhana dan tanpa dasaran di awal cerita dengan kemampuannya di masa sekarang, adalah hal yang mungkin bagi para reader untuk merasakan besarnya jarak sehingga sang tokoh utama tidak terlihat seperti karakter yang sama. Sedangkan untuk evaluasinya, ada begitu banyak kritikan cukup berat di awal cerita, namun popularitasnya meningkat pesat setelah itu. Seperti yang dijelaskan di atas, perbaikan dalam penulisan dan pertumbuhan tokoh utama menyebabkan terjadinya perubahan yang cepat dalam komentar-komentar tersebut. Namun, perilaku egois dan frustasi karakter utama tersebut seringkali menyebabkan banyak reader berhenti membaca bagian awalnya.

Lopobia · Game
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Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb

Somebody once told me the world is gonna roll me I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb In the shape of an "L" on her forehead Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running Didn't make sense not to live for fun Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb So much to do, so much to see So what's wrong with taking the back streets? You'll never know if you don't go You'll never shine if you don't glow Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid And all that glitters is gold Only shooting stars break the mold It's a cool place and they say it gets colder You're bundled up now, wait till you get older But the meteor men beg to differ Judging by the hole in the satellite picture The ice we skate is getting pretty thin The water's getting warm so you might as well swim My world's on fire, how about yours? That's the way I like it and I never get bored Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid All that glitters is gold Only shooting stars break the mold Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid And all that glitters is gold Only shooting stars Somebody once asked could I spare some change for gas? I need to get myself away from this place I said yep what a concept I could use a little fuel myself And we could all use a little change Well, the years start coming and they don't stop coming Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running Didn't make sense not to live for fun Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb So much to do, so much to see So what's wrong with taking the back streets? You'll never know if you don't go (go!) You'll never shine if you don't glow Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid And all that glitters is gold Only shooting stars break the mold And all that glitters is gold Only shooting stars break the mold

Not_a_troll · perkotaan
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