Unlimited Retries

i would recommend reading it. there are a few gramatical errors that could be fixed if the author used word or grammerly but its not enough to hinder reading. biggest problem is that you know almost nothing about the mc. the chapters are really short and what you can read doesnt tell you much about him so you would honestly feel no reason to feel bad about him dying or succeeding. but the interaction between characters arent bad. all in all id say its decent but needs some work. and to go head and read what little there is.

Shameless review by the author Just give the story a try and leave some advice, this is my first fanfic I'm a college student and will try posting when I can