True God of the New World

Even though it has few chapters and is very good, I liked the idea; I just don’t see much development. The story is good, and the concept is strong, but in the chapters you posted, it's already the beginning and the end. Kira is practically too OP, which makes future confrontations difficult, unless you add another power system or introduce another person with a Death Note as Kira’s enemy. Having another person with a Death Note as an adversary would be amazing. But the story is really good; keep it up! 10/10.

it's a very nice start, you just have to remember that the power should degenerate more and more, this both keeps the story alive and does not restrict your creativity

This story has a very good start and good potential. Hope the author finishes this story unlike the other ones.