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Transmigrated by Accident

Penulis: EldridSmith
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What is Transmigrated by Accident

Baca novel Transmigrated by Accident yang ditulis oleh penulis EldridSmith yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. A random 17 year old was transmigrated to the world of Golkindarr; where magic is reality. As he arrived the lord of the realm realized he made a mistake and granted him with 1 wish.He wished for a sy...

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A random 17 year old was transmigrated to the world of Golkindarr; where magic is reality. As he arrived the lord of the realm realized he made a mistake and granted him with 1 wish. He wished for a system, and now he embarks on the path of cultivation, with a goal to bring all his friends over to join him on a grand adventure for the ages, and because it'll be more fun. Discord link: https://discord.gg/jYxFSgu

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My reflection in your eyes

Du Ru Ran became an orphan at the age of 5 years old after a deliberate car accident. She was then taken in by her uncle. Life was truly tragic but being a smart girl, she managed to turn the tides around. She plans to avenge the death of her parents and her little brother who she did not get to meet in this lifetime. At that time, thank her lucky or unlucky star, she met a pair of mother and son, who gave her some warmth in her moment of total darkness. Years later, when they meet again, he stuck to her like a fly she could not get rid off. He kept insisting she took advantage of him when they were young and insisted that she take full responsibility for him. 20 years ago: "Little girl, you really need to take responsibility on this young master when we are older. I am never going to let you go." He whispered into her ears. Due to his illness, he somehow grew up a little mature than peers his age. Hence, it wasn't a normal for him to be thinking about his future at such young age. In fact, since he was three years old, he had been groomed to be a fine young man in order to prepare him as he is the next heir of his prestigious family. He fell asleep with a smile on his face. At the present: She thought a dumb cupid made a mistake by accidentally release an arrow and the arrow went straight to a 7 year old boy and now, 20 years later, he is delusional. "Why can't you leave me alone? I really have no time, no room for another person. I am pretty occupied with getting my revenge. Go and fly away," she said while making the hand gestures of shooing a pesky fly away. "You really don't need to work hard on my behalf, I am touched that you worry about my well being and feeling. As long as I get to see you, that is all I require. You really don't have to do anything." Ru Ran felt her head is going to explode, shameless, when did I, how on earth did he manage to lift himself so high that even direct language don't get to his thick skull? Fine, if you don't want to leave, I will walk away. True to her thoughts she walked away huffing and puffing, fuming at the fly she can't get off. "Wifey wait up!!!" "Seriously, what do you see in me?" she asked impatiently. Instead of answering her immediately, he spun he around to face him, pushed her to lean against a nearby wall, locked her body with his legs and arm in order to stop her from escaping. His facial expression turn serious, gone the silly demeanor he had put up earlier. Her heartbeat increased and her palms started to sweat. She stuttered, "What.. What.. Just what do you plan to do?" "I am going to answer your question. Look me in the eyes. I see a beautiful lady, a stubborn one, cold exterior but inside she is kind and afraid to get hurt. She gave me a kiss 20 years ago and gave me the strength to live and from that day onwards, I have given my heart to her." A story about love and revenge. (I hope so) Updates: 1 chapter / day occasionally can go up to 2 chapters a day depending on my creative thoughts as well the time that is available for me to write P/s: cover is not my own work.

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EldridSmith
EldridSmithPenulisEldridSmith

Feel free to leave feedback in the comments of this review, it would be much appreciated. Pardon my shamelessness, but I thought I'd take the time to tell you I'm new and since I'm in highschool things are hectic, so I will try to update whenever I can. Please be patient with me and thank you for taking the time to read this.

DeJeL
DeJeLLv15DeJeL

*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: try to warn your readers before a delayed release if possible.;,;. Positive Feedback: You did well in every aria that is graded by reviews.;,;. Personal Feedback: You had good writing, and a well thought out plot, but I'm sorry, this novel is just not my cup of tea.;,;. Keep up the good work.;,;.

Azathothgrim
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Steven_Beck
Steven_BeckLv5Steven_Beck

This book is so lol I can’t stop so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

M_A_Ilmi
M_A_IlmiLv5M_A_Ilmi

I really like your story but you need one thing. Dialogue. Example ( My own) : "interestingly the man you are changes equation" Add said, or replied ,words that make a dialogue. "interestingly the man you are changes equation" Ezueil said. An annoyed expression blanketing his face. "Indeed it does" Malim replied, indifference evident in his tone. This makes it interesting Love it anyway and keep on going

Steven_Beck
Steven_BeckLv5Steven_Beck

This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏🙏

_Transcendent
_TranscendentLv14_Transcendent

goodluck............................................................................... ........................................................ ......................

cjrossi95
cjrossi95Lv14cjrossi95

I really enjoy the characters in this story especially Dave. I think Eldrid is pretty OP already but with this prophecy thing I guess he will get stronger. The references to real life things is also a great touch. I like the part where the author referred to Zarya from Overwatch when describing Sasha. This novel is great and I would recommend this to my friends.

BoredPanda
BoredPandaLv3BoredPanda

Writing Quality is great, smooth sentences, greatly describes situations, but some words may have been misused. Benefactor- according to uncle Google, a Benefactor are those who give money or other things to help those in need... I don't see how, Adrian was it?, Adrian needs any help, after all he has a family and a normal life on earth. Stability Updates is good, no complaints there. Story Developmwnt is fast-paced, things like cultivation, universes, cosmo, spirits and such were explained in Ch1.. A bit too fast paced, you should have explained those when the situation is where they do the actual things. Character Design is good, the protagonist are calm even though they got sent to an unknown place. Ah no, actually they were TOO calm, being sent to an unknown palce with magics and such, not knowing if they are going to get killed, they should have at least panicked or at least showed fear...It's okay to have a calm personality, but being too calm makes them look like they don't care what happens to them. World Background is great, transported to another world with magic and cultivation, but still part of the Universe. I envy authors like you who makes unique concepts, I hope your Novel gets the Spotlight soon. Keep up the Good work.

BrightestStar666
BrightestStar666Lv4BrightestStar666

The world building and writing quality is what I like about the novel so far. It is detailed and quite easy to get into. I can say that the novel has started off strong, a bit too strong... The build-up was a bit too fast in my opinion and Eldrid and his friend believe that the there is cultivation and the guy in front of them is the Realm Lord too fast. We also don't know what kind of a character Eldrid is yet. It is too early to completely judge the novel.

NineLife
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HavenlyJeep
HavenlyJeepLv5HavenlyJeep

My second review. The rewritten version is WAY better than the previous one. Good pacing, great world-building. Also, long-haired Eldrid is forever BADASS! Read this author's story right now! Don't take your eyes off it! Be immersed in it!

BookBoi
BookBoiLv2BookBoi

IT'S AMAZING!!! NEED MORE!!! It's well written, entertaining, and has great world building, character personalities, and has great grammar.

daoist_om
daoist_omLv4daoist_om

I still say that mc and his friend accepted their transmigration little too easily exposition should be done moderately sometimes it just crosses the line a little now for good things very nice descriptions the author is trying to create a picturesque feel to the novel and is mostly succeeding mc friendship feels real, It is one moot point in which this novel hit it out of the park for me. the power system is well explained and so is world-building done nicely and the author isn't spoon feeding which is a very good thing. It's a surprisingly good novel and I wish it all the best

Fvdv
FvdvLv12Fvdv

I like the rewrite. at first it was to messy and to fast, now there is a nice build up, the MC's getting more clear in the story line . So far it deserves a place in my library.

SnoozySloth
SnoozySlothLv5SnoozySloth

Note: I give 5 stars regardless of what I write below. I wrote this review as of 7 chapters. Writing Quality 3.5/5. This is the main area the novel suffers, though its still relatively easy to read. There are a lot of run-on sentences. Some poor sentence structuring. A lot of comma misuse. Still, I wouldn't let that turn you away from this novel, because it's a quick read that's easy to follow. Updates: Dunno. New reader. Story Development 4.5/5: We've got some interesting developments happening very quickly. It kept my interest, which is relatively rare for most novels these days. Minus half a point for unnecessary overuse of time-skips. Character Design 4/5: What's the difference between Adrian and Eldrid except that one is lucky/athletic and one is fat? Their personalities and emotions need to be fleshed out more. They don't express themselves when things happen. No frowning, questioning, sarcasm, trembling/fear, etc. Despite that, I like both characters. But some potential is being wasted here. World Background 5/5: I know what's happening. Things only get more interesting as you go with the introduction of Adrian's master. Final thoughts: You're doing a good job. Your ideas and story pacing are both excellent. Work on grammar, sentence structure, and character emotions. Then your novel will soar in quality. I gave you some example comments in the first three chapters. I hope they help.

Dark_Reality
Dark_RealityLv4Dark_Reality

Okay, so I'll start with the bad things first. 1- Why did both of them accept the fact that they were teleported into an unknown world with magic so easily? It made no sense to me. 2- Chapter 7 could be written much better with the interactions and the reveal that he can cultivate fast. Now the good things. 1- I like the cultivation paths. 2- It's also good that both the characters were brought to the new world. Tips 1- Try to increase your descriptions of the surroundings such as towns and forests. 2- I found some word mistakes so try to use Grammarly or ProWritingAid to fix those. The story still has a lot of ways to improve which will make it even better.

Jessie
JessieLv5Jessie

It was really interesting, like nothing I've read before lol Adrian is such a down to earth character. The plot is good, world back is good, you seem to build it as you go along and the characters are like a bonus. 🤗 Keep going! Added to my collection, more chapters please

Okika252
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Read the book interesting take on things and decent grammar and world building!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! +++++++++------------------

Mav12
Mav12Lv13Mav12

First of all, i like storyy sooooo much. I just hope the author see this and keep uploading. For me this is for me so far is a light hearted story, with likable MC and a little bit of comedy. The world building and character background is still not clear enough but i think its better this way, i mean like i said its a light hearted story and you dont want so much info dump crap for this kind of story, still i hope slowly but surely the author could talk a little more what kind of world hes building, the connection between every character. You could after a little bit talk about the world, make it so that they creating a organization just by them self to make name for them self, no need for a heavy conflict or something like that, its just because how playful they are. Its just my suggestion, i mean i think that gonna be interesting. Anyway i just hope you keep on uploading new chapters. Good luck. Sorry for my messy english as im not really good at grammar hahaha

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