The Path of Destruction

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The opening chapters are excellent! The pacing is just right—not too fast nor too slow, making for an engaging read. The writing style is fantastic; it's eloquent and captivating. I can't wait for more chapters and new characters to be added, and I would love to see this become a webtoon. Keep up the good work [img=recommend]

my first tip is: don't be put off by the longer opening chapter. the reading is smooth and the world presented has many interesting details. I'm not particularly fond of books in 1st pov, but for now (I've only read the first two chapters) the author is handling it well. Given the slow pace, however, I would have preferred a more detailed construction of the village and its family, perhaps dedicating the entire first chapter to it. Overall an interesting read, I will definitely continue to follow the story hoping it stays on these levels.

Want a novel with with longer chapter but Still want Quality this is the book for you. Writing Quality - It's good, when I say good it doesn't mean author is blabbering artistic words that don't make sense. But is using right words at right place, the words used are simple but with spelling mistakes a little grammar here and there but it's all fine. Only one of the few book I will recommend that uses 1st pov so you get the depth of what I am saying. Chapter a little longer than usual but I guess author might be using the printed book chapter as reference. Story Development - It's a slow-paced novel but it might get faster as the time and chapter goes by. But what I am disappointed in is how the village was and parents were quickly out of the picture. Like I don't feel sorry for them. Cause I didn't even get chance to get immersed in the story yet and get bonded with characters. So Mc's revenge or vengeance kinda seems like a classic over used trope. Except that it's a exception read if you are fan of the troupe. Character Design - While the Mc seems reckless at time I am pretty sure he will get his character growth. While many mysterious characters are already given a glimpse. So will stay tuned to meet the rest. Especially the silver haired blue eyed 👀 candy. Updating Stability - Doing good don't be pressured but maybe a release of 5-10 chapter at the start simultaneously might be preferred. World Background - It's well explained in the novel so read it reader I won't be spoon feeding you every little detail. Show some respect for authors hard work. And write some comments if you like it.

writing is well structured and Designed very good going forward what's your secret

Promising, entertaining and also well-written with some really engaging wow moments. The stakes, downfall and the glimpse of a rise in the Mc's character are some of my favourites here. The only downside is the length. Sometimes it gets a tad too long... needs some trimming. Other than that, the novel has a lot to go in for. Good Start!

Your writing is well-structured, and the dialogue between characters flows smoothly. The descriptions of the environment and the characters' actions and expressions are clear and concise, making it easy for readers to visualize the scene. There are no significant grammar or spelling errors that could distract from the story. Overall, it is a well-written piece of dialogue and storytelling. Good job!

The concept and the world-building of the story is phenomenal ..I found myself engaged in the book. It's a good read and a good deal of time..quite entertain.. Count me as a reader author Wish you luck for future..

The story is really good. I'm not a big fan for fantasy but if u tell me to read this book i will. The development of the story is on point. hoping for surprises from the author keep it up

A brilliant start! I have read just the 2 chapters and there is already a lot going on there. The author has given us a world where powerful men are fighting over the power of stars. And fighting them, we have a strong protagonist. It is quick, elaborate and well-paced.