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The new System

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Jay is a new college student, 19 years old, travel to Australia to visit his step mom Liz's twin sis, aunt Bec in his gap year, died in air plane crash. He went to the hell. A demon succubus Lilith took his soul and discovered all his evil thoughts, which is why he is in hell.

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Chapter 1Everything Started From Hell

Jay has always been an ordinary boy, an average college kid - having fun in class, struggling to keep his finances afloat due to bloody student loans, and worst of all, falling in love with a girl to start his love life. As the sun rose on the last day of his 18, he couldn't help but think back to the platitudes promises that had been made to him since he'd become an adult legally. "When you turn 18, your life would change." they assured him. Which is why, he took the whole year of his 18 out, AKA gap year, to explore the meaning of his life, to find the purpose. But as the year wore on, he found himself trapped in familiar routines and disappointments. The transformation he expected seemed still beyond his control. Until...

Today, the last day of his 18, he took the early flight to Australia, to visit his mother Liz's twin sister, Aunt Bec. This trip was the last hope for him before finishing his gap year and going to college, as he had spent all his saved up for this long journey. He boarded the flight with his backpack, camera, and a passion for photography. Yes, his plan was to explore the outback of Australia and took a lot of professional photos and sell them for profit. Photography might be the only purpose of life he has found out so far. Little did he know that fate had different plans for this chapter of his life.

He found his seat next to a friendly 40ish lady who introduced herself as Mrs. Davies, Anna Davies. She was coming back to Sydney after visiting her cousin in LA. They chatted for a while, exchanging stories and tips about traveling in Australia. Jay felt a surge of hope as he looked out the window and saw the clouds below him. He was finally seeing some light of his life. He closed his eyes after a few hours of boring flying through the sky and drifted into a peaceful sleep, unaware of the horror that awaited him.

What was initially intended as a pre-college escapade to savor the unknown quickly transformed into a grim narrative of tragedy. A few hours later, the airplane carrying Jay and numerous other souls met its end in a blaze of fire and steel. He was jolted awake by a loud bang. He opened his eyes and saw smoke filling the cabin. He heard screams and cries of panic from the passengers and crew. He smelled burning fuel and metal, and felt a sharp pain in his chest as the seat belt tightened around him. He looked out the window and saw flames engulfing the wing of the plane. The destination they sought remained distant, forever out of reach.

He was terrified.

He grabbed his camera and tried to take a picture of the scene, hoping to capture his last moments alive. He wanted to leave something behind for his family and friends, something that would tell them he loved them, and he was sorry.

The plane didn't wait for him to press the shutter button, tilting and plunging into a nosedive. He felt a surge of adrenaline as he braced himself for impact. People didn't lie to him this time that he did start thinking of his short life, his kind mother Liz, his stepfather, his biological father who had passed away years before, his aunt Bec, his boss Lisa, his teacher Sarah, and his friends....

He thought of how unfair life was, how cruel fate was, how short his journey was, especially, he would die as a virgin...

He thought of the rumor among his friends that if he died as a virgin at 18, he would go to hell.

He thought he almost made it to 19, just one last day or even just hours left.

He thought of nothing.

He felt nothing.

He was gone.

God knows how long...

Or Jay should say, devil knows how long it had passed...

Amid the charred wreckage and broken dreams, he found himself in a space beyond space, a realm outside the realm of the living. Hellish echoes reverberated, and the specter of death danced through his thoughts. The once-familiar reality had faded, replaced by a visceral experience that defied explanation. This was not the adventure he had envisioned; it was a place where hope waned, and souls languished.

The rumor must be right... An 18 year old boy died as a virgin goes to hell.

Hell awaits him, and its grip grows tighter as he confronts his inner demons and his darkest desires. Amidst the torment, a seductive and sinister presence emerged. He couldn't ignore her among all these scary creatures. He was wondering why there was such a seductive girl in hell. As if reading his mind, she introduced herself - Lilith. A name that carried the weight of centuries, a succubus with eyes that pierced through Jay's very being. She was the embodiment of temptation, a creature of darkness that had traversed dimensions to meet him. In her presence, Jay's essence lay bare, every secret, every desire exposed like fragile artifacts. Lilith's unearthly gaze swept over him, delving into the shadows that had long lingered in his heart.

In the recesses of this afterlife, Lilith revealed his innermost thoughts, the corners of his mind where wickedness resided. It was these very thoughts that had become his shackles, chains that bound him to this infernal realm. It was these thoughts that had cast him into the abyss. Lilith saw them all – the impulses that had gone unspoken, the dark corners that had gone unnoticed. And she smiled, a smile that held the promise of damnation. She delved deep into Jay's soul and unearthed the darkness within. It was this darkness that had brought him to this damned place.

Lilith, her eyes gleaming like black onyx, slithers closer in the shadows. Lilith beckons to him with a hypnotic smile, her voice laced with suggestion "Welcome to hell, my playground. I see you've got a bit of a roving eye, my new plaything. I love the new soul falling to hell, full of unfulfilled dirty desires, especially the virgin boy's desires. Let's explore the depths of your psyche. Just imagine, my pet… the things you always want to do before sinking to the hell. A game of seduction and control like no other. Play with me… Let me show you what true seduction looks like."

She flied around me, checking on my soul. "You have chosen quite a dark path, my dear. Just allow me to take you to a place where nothing is forbidden, where the only rule is pleasure. You will be my slave, and I will be your master. Let's begin, my pet."

Lilith took his hand and led him to the underworld. As he entered, he could feel the darkness wrapping itself around him, binding him to her will. She took him to a place of decadence and sin... a playground for the damned.

Lilith smiled, pleased at his obedience. She could feel the lust and desire pouring from his body like a river of molten lava. She could see the unfulfilled desires shining in hiseyes like diamonds in the darkness.

She began leading him through the streets of hell, taking him places that most souls would consider taboo or sinful. Soon enough, he found himself lost amid an erotic world filled with temptation and sin.

As they walked along together, Lilith kept looking back over her shoulder at him, smiling mischievously. It seemed that every time she does so, there's something new waiting behind them - another alleyway brimming with excitement or another doorway leading to some hidden room full of pleasures.

Finally, after what feels like hours but was probably just minutes, they arrived at their destination.

"This way, my dear~" She said, turning towards the door ahead of them. As soon as they opened it, they're greeted by an endless sea of possibilities and pleasures.

Lilith led him inside, then closed the door behind them, plunging them into total darkness. Presumably after a few seconds, the lights came on. They shined down upon a vast array of erotic delights.

"My sweet. What do you think? This is Lilith's Den, my virgin plaything. It's a place I created especially for you and all the other mortals that I seduce. Every desire you've ever had will be fulfilled here, and then some. You'll never want anything ever again."

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