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The Hysteria Scythe

Penulis: RaiyAkumu
Horror&Thriller
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What is The Hysteria Scythe

Baca novel The Hysteria Scythe yang ditulis oleh penulis RaiyAkumu yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. Deep within a forgotten forest, is a swirling frenzy of darkness. Among the darkness exists a Scythe, a dark and haunting scythe. Engraved on the handle of the Scythe states "The House of Hysteria".A ...

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Deep within a forgotten forest, is a swirling frenzy of darkness. Among the darkness exists a Scythe, a dark and haunting scythe. Engraved on the handle of the Scythe states "The House of Hysteria". A child, appearing to be the age of 12, wanders into a dark and mysteriously omniscient forest, and finds herself lost. Suddenly she is attacked by wolves, and then she collapses, and her fragile, lifeless form lies on the forest floor, her name was Kayda. [Disclaimer: This is a very short story, I am writing this for entertainment purposes only, I have no intention of writing more than 10k words for this story.]

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Kaila_Nunez
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The premise to this story is very interesting! The idea of having to die over and over again against your will is chilling but intriguing. I want to find out what happens next. The only suggestion I would make is to pay attention to the use of repetition. There are a lot of "I mean" and "Now," and so on that make the story seem repetitive. Perhaps maybe there could be some light of hope or at least comic relief to lighten the story a bit? But other than that, it's a good read.

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Main_Island
Main_IslandLv3Main_Island

It is good, like you said, it's a short story too and you don't intend for it to go big, so the 1 chapter is understandable. Overall, it's really good so far. The grammar better than the majority of the books on this platform.

NataliaMeza
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I Like the story but write a more details of how the protagonist is like. Hair, gender, body. The details of the gore is interesting! But I like were the story is going!

Mr_Morning_Star
Mr_Morning_StarLv11Mr_Morning_Star

Honestly has potential, it's a good read although it could use some more formal speech. If the whole point is to be a monologue of a necromancer talking to himself than it's perfect. Wish the author the best, and more to come!

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