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The Fifth House: Galegold (grammatically corrected and redone)

Penulis: Echo_Chamber
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What is The Fifth House: Galegold (grammatically corrected and redone)

Baca novel The Fifth House: Galegold (grammatically corrected and redone) yang ditulis oleh penulis Echo_Chamber yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. Credit: Cadenadeaventuras. A fair amount is his work early on with little changes then I decided to do my own thing. I'm doing some major changes to the story overall. I take no credit for his work. K...

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Credit: Cadenadeaventuras. A fair amount is his work early on with little changes then I decided to do my own thing. I'm doing some major changes to the story overall. I take no credit for his work. Keep in mind that my MC is obscenely smart in comparison to original.

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Matahari Yang Hilang

Sehari dalam kegelapan, seminggu dalam kegelapan, bertahun dalam kegelapan dan akhirnya kegelapan itu tidak berpenghujung. Itulah yang berlaku kepada alam usai suatu sinar putih memancar dengan terangnya ke seluruh tempat. Alam kehilangan matahari secara tiba-tiba. Matahari Yang Hilang... Tiada lagi kehangatan yang mampu menyeimbangkan dunia. Ribut taufan, ribut salju, ribut pasir bahkan gempa bumi, itu adalah hiasan alam sejak matahari hilang daripada bersinar. Tiada lagi istilah di siang hari, yang ada hanya bulan yang bersinar. Di kala bulan kehilangan sinarnya, kegelapan membalut dunia di setiap penjuru alam. Sinaran putih? Misterinya tidak hanya terhenti di situ, sinaran itu juga membuatkan manusia, haiwan dan tumbuhan bermutasi menjadi sesuatu yang baru. Raksasa? tumbuhan ajaib? haiwan baru? kesemuanya telah berlaku. Manusia? Manusia hidup dalam kegelapan. Manusia hidup dalam kepupusan yang menghantui. Manusia diburu, dibunuh dan ditelan. Makhluk yang bermutasi menjadi ancama yang baru. Memburu darah merah yang manusia miliki. Harapan... Pasti ada harapan... Manusia perlu mencari harapan untuk hidup di dalam norma yang baru ini. Seratus tahun telah berlalu, adakah manusia masih tersisa untuk mencari dan membina harapan yang baru? Seratus tahun telah berlalu... Seorang pemuda berjalan, mengembara, mencari sinar harapan untuk manusia. Merempuh segala kegelapan dan badai demi mencari sinaran yang masih tersisa di dalam jiwa manusia. Tekad harus digenggam, yakin tersemat di dalam jiwa pasti ada manusia di alam itu yang tersisa. Masih adakah manusia yang tersisa? masih adakah harapan? masih adakah sinar kehidupan? Tiada siapa yang tahu... namun jawapannya harus dicari. Dia harus berjalan, terus berjalan membina sinar untuk manusia semula. Meski belum kelihatan, ianya tidak bermakna sinar itu hilang sepenuhnya daripada alam itu.

HanyaSeorangWatak · Fantasi
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5 Chs

Billionaire's Second Chance After Betrayal

Fuck Me! Deeper! Harder! Victor! " Monica murmured with her seductive and calm voice. Julia could hear the soft moans of her best friend with her billionaire husband outside their bedroom. With her heart shattered by betrayal, she decided to hide her pregnancy and raise the kids on her own. After all, their marriage is contracted by mutual benefits. Three years later after their divorce, billionaire Victor met Julia again. "Father! Please don't hurt mama!" As Victor pressed Julia against the wall, three little kids yelled loudly and tried to stop him. "Three of them?" Questioned Victor angrily as he heard the word 'father' yelled from their lips. "Didn't you abort the child back then?" "Victor, these are my children! Don't you dare touch my children!" Julia screamed frantically as her heart drummed against her chest. "You are the one who betrayed me with Monica and forced me to hide your children! I don’t want you, or need you in our lives! Get lost! Disappear from our world!" "But Julia... I love you..." In her flaming eyes, Julia could see him as nothing but a traitor. Yet, hearing his soft words, and his pleading eyes, why did her heart beat crazily after these long years apart? Surely she couldn’t still be in love with the man who had discarded her so easily all those years ago? Will she give the billionaire CEO a second chance after the betrayal? How will the triplets treat their biological father after their divorce?

Abeille · perkotaan
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78 Chs

I Get Privileges in the Zombie World

Regulus Maximillian is an ordinary young man who lives alone in the studio apartment he rents with the rest of his savings. He just graduated from college and is currently a training employee at a company. Daily, he is often called Max. His days are normal and boring, but everything changes when his country is hit by a zombie outbreak so that more than half of the human population turns into vicious zombies that infect healthy people. A strange system appears for everyone to find out the level, strength, and ability of people and also to be more careful with Zombies who also have different levels, and for some reason, Max's system is a little strange. He can see everyone's system, even though he shouldn't be able to because their abilities are kept secret from each other. Max can also see various vital points to finish off the zombies. Not only that, Max can see a map of the entire city, the location of the supermarket to the whereabouts of the zombies, and also knows a lot of tricks that the system only tells him. And he also gets various kinds of privileges. Especially for him and his mother. From this plague, Max joined many people from various tribes and regions. Many foreign nationals were also trapped in the metropolis when the Zombie outbreak occurred. Max's life, who was previously just an ordinary man, suddenly became a man with the greatest ability among the remaining humans thanks to his sudden special ability he got. Will Max survive amid a sea of Zombies? Or just become one of those crazy Zombies? And, why were Max and his Mother's System different from everyone else?

Moonroses_ · Seni bela diri
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7 Chs

Elemental Vampire

Nathan, a sixteen year old boy known for his hot temper, is forced to leave his friends and relocate to the countryside with his family after his father loses his job. In the new environment, Nathan finds solace in a nearby forest. One day while he was walking around the forest, he encounters a mysterious woman with blue hair and red eyes. Before he could react, the woman transforms into a beam of light and causes Nathan to undergo a transformation. At the same time, a huge energy blast occured and it could be seen by everyone on earth. The blast caused earth to undergo a drastic change and people with abilities called gifted appeared. When he wakes up sixteen years later, he discovers he has become a vampire with elemental powers due to the mysterious woman he saw inside the forest. He also found out that she was inside him and she also had a mission of her own, but he still remained sixteen years old due to her freezing the time around him. In return for the power she gave him, he was given a dire task to become the king of the vampires. Determined to find his family, Nathan embarks on a thrilling journey, using his newfound abilities and the system given to him by the mysterious woman to navigate a world filled with danger and mystery. Join Nathan as he rises to the top and uncovers the secrets that lie ahead while also searching for his family. ******************************************** Note: This is my first novel, so I will improve the more I write. Please support me with power stones, golden tickets, gifts and comments. It'll motivate me alot. Thank you. Join the discord please: https://discord.com/invite/8JcgTgrcV7

anime_otaku_6087 · Seni bela diri
4.8
190 Chs

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Postmand
PostmandLv14Postmand

Good book, bad MC The grammar is fine and the idea is good, but what takes the novel down is the worldbuilding and MC. World building: has too strong magic for a wand so he can automatically do windless magic, the fifth house is a new concept for me but it’s poorly executed in this novel and too good/OP compared to the other. The reason for them not knowing why the house was there was rushed and poorly thought out aswell. MC: The mc was a baby for 1000 that got his knowledge though some family magic, he has a superiority complex were he looks down on everyone in the story like Ron, Harry, Malfoy and every teacher it feels like. It get annoying real quick that he doesn’t try to get to know them but just judges them even when they are nice. He doesn’t show any basic respect for anyone even when they are nice to him and is like “yeah you would probably do something for your ‘greater good’” even when he just wants to know some basic knowledge that is pretty relevant for the future. So overall he just feels like a kid Malfoy that can do wandless magic and comes from a even better family.

LongNi
LongNiLv14LongNi

Thank you for editing this book it’s an interesting read No offense to the original author but the names and grammar was all over the place This one’s grammar is good and names are consistent and right

Eade_2021
Eade_2021Lv2Eade_2021

Thank you for making one of my favorite stories more enjoyable to read than the original and no fence to the real author of the original story.

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