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The Era of Evolution

Penulis: Pleki
Fantasy
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What is The Era of Evolution

Baca novel The Era of Evolution yang ditulis oleh penulis Pleki yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. In the year 2250, the world is dying and humanity is forced to adapt to the change. To help the world the world leaders launch a project that would give humanity a power t fight for their survival in ...

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In the year 2250, the world is dying and humanity is forced to adapt to the change. To help the world the world leaders launch a project that would give humanity a power t fight for their survival in the new era. Our protagonist is a 17-year-old crippled who paralyzed from the waist down. Watch as he found a path that are uniques for him and helps his companions and family. -- You can also support me and buy me coffe on this link: https://ko-fi.com/pleki20 --Cover is stolen from freepik-- https://www.freepik.com/free-photo/fictitious-floating-island_918253.htm

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The death of a flower

Railcrossing. The cars on either side are waiting for the train. High speed train will come at any moment. Linemen have lowered obstacles on both sides of the level crossing. But no one frowned at that. At the risk of his life, he is crossing like that. This scene is always seen in almost all the rail crossings of the capital. Mr. Anis is sitting in the car. It is very hot. This summer he is wearing a cute suit again. The driver stopped the car and lit a cigarette. The smell of cigarettes is taking his breath away. Mr. Anis wants to get the driver out of the car by the collar and slap him hard Maybe even a little peace could be found. But the problem is, drivers can't say a word now. He left the job as soon as he was told. Those who can't go, they say for two days in a row, sir, the car is broken, it's broken. It may take at least tens of thousands to survive. Unbearably hot! Nah, not being tolerated anymore. Due to the low vegetation, the level of scorching heat is higher in urban areas. Mr. Anis sometimes thinks that if he ever becomes a minister of the country, he will fill the city with trees. Two consecutive trees 7 People in the shade of trees will stand and wait for the bus. What a beautiful sight! It's good to think about all this. It started raining. It started to rain. It's ten minutes. There is no news of the train coming. A girl is walking. Basket of roses in hand. Raindrops are falling on rose petals. The flowers are smiling. Slowly becoming alive. The girl is standing in front of the car window saying something. No one is buying her flowers. The girl is coming forward with the shadow of Maya's twilight on her sad face. Walking randomly. If one foot touches the other, it may fall to the ground. The speed at which the girl was walking did not change. He is trying hard to survive with the drizzle on his head. It has become very wet. 'Sir took a flower. Only ten teha. ' 'What's your name?' 'Flowers.' 'Your name is also a flower?' 'Yes, sir. Giya Moshammat Phulphulia is a good name. Tay Amma caresses and burns flowers. ' 'How many flowers have you sold all day?' 'Eyes are not good. Rainy days. There is no trade. Theika Mela fever-cold last night. It seems a little less, so I went out with flowers. ' 'Won't the wet fever increase in this rain?' 'Even if the fever increases, it is good. Stay at home I don't want to eat anything. It feels so comfortable, so hunger is pressing. This is a palette of flowers. There was no need to feed the lost days. ' 'How many flowers are in your basket?' '12 flowers. 120 teha. If you take it all, give it to Duida for free. ' 'Keep this 500, how?' Fulphulia is staring. Blind fish sight. He has never seen such an incident. This is the first time he saw a 500 rupees note. 'Where do you live?' 'Sir, isn't there a big slum near Malibagh railway gate? That's where Thahi is. ' No rain. Wet wet air is coming from far away. Fulphulia's face has become brighter. What a sweet look of the girl! Long eyelids, shady eyes. Those eyes are smiling all the time. Her curly hair is also flying in the wind. The train is coming forward with a long whistle. Fulphulia is looking at the 500 rupees note upside down. Seeing the train crossing the line. The melody of the lineman's flute, the terrible whistle of the train he can't hear. Maybe you will never hear again. * Author: saidul Robin

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SubtomicLine80
SubtomicLine80Lv6SubtomicLine80

i would like to give a 5-star because this is a great novel with well made world background and charter design which is getting more and more annoying to find these days but the stability of updates has stopped me so to anyone reading this its a good novel just wait a while for the next chapter

Savage_Watermelon
Savage_WatermelonLv5Savage_Watermelon

Stephen Hawking is that you? ......................................................................................... BTW that would be a nice story: "the transmigration of Stephen Hawking"

Pleki
PlekiPenulisPleki

If even the author doesn't have the confidence about the stories they wrote why even bother to read it. So i'm just gonna give myself a 5 star review. If you have any criticism about the stories that i write please elaborate and give me some advice. Please give a review and comment about my novel if you interested in it.

LiquidHatred
LiquidHatredLv11LiquidHatred

Good story like it so far just stability is a little questionable. I kinda wish there wasnt a 140 character min. So i see potatos every where

Eddicted
EddictedLv5Eddicted

1.your novel has a lot of grammer mistakes. 2.your mc is not really mc.he is nothing different from a side charecter 3.you may want to build a world background but all you did is explain and elongate what readers will normally understand and dont need explaining and there by making nearly 36 chapters into fillers and you give unstable updates.you take a very small thing and take an entire chapter to explain it.it looks like you just want to post something to show.you are writing a game genre but didnt go into any action for 40 chapters No wonder you got only 14 reviews in nearly 4 months.who would even be interested in reading a novel that is concentrated on just stating useless,uninteresting stuff for so long. As a reader i would like to suggest you drop this novel as it only makes you look like a writer with "lack of sincierity" and who just wants to elongate the chapters and stuff it with fillers to keep it going. But if this is not what you really meant to write,then i suggest you to write a new novel with some action,real interesting story(not elongating,explaining useless and easily understandable stuff,very excessive useless communication that is neither comedy nor important nor entertaining),making mc powerful not just some guide and caretaker. Goodluck

GreyMalken
GreyMalkenLv14GreyMalken

Ok so...readable but.... in desperate need of some editing and polish. Awkward tenses, run-on sentences, and small walls of text abound. There is potential here, but someone needs to get in there with some elbow grease and red ink to clean it up.

hellenator
hellenatorLv5hellenator

just found the novel, really well written, read the whole story in one go so far, thanks for your work, really waiting for the next chapters, haven't found a story with such a well designed world in a while

SpongeSponge
SpongeSpongeLv14SpongeSponge

i really like how the author the author explain a lot of stuff sometimes too much but for me it's good compare to other novels who doesn't gave explanation and just booom power up. Slow starts and explain world background clearly. 1 thing i can says the author can improve is the character descriptions. only name, gender, and age is kinda vague for me but maybe it's gave a lot imagination to others reader but for me it's better with some description like hair colour or something. love the characther development wether it's the power up or the personality. 5/5 would read

Venerable_Soveris
Venerable_SoverisLv1Venerable_Soveris

The novel is great, I don’t know if it was dropped or the author had personal reasons but it’s been 2+ years and I don’t see any notice. I really want to know if the author has gone to another site or has done a different novel.

Celtend
CeltendLv12Celtend

This story is wonderful for the genre, its unique a nd it intriguingly drew me in. The issue I had which dropped the rating is it not updating for three months now, did you start writing on a different platform?

Hellix
HellixLv15Hellix

I like the story begins and how it progresses with the character. I can't wait to see more chapters come out and progress the main character.

Asheestant
AsheestantLv3Asheestant

Not bad for a starter author... its great though u have a tendency to write the obvious... like impossible this impossible that- idiot! U already have a summoned pet ! Yet u still stating the fact that those are inpossible?! Come here let me smack ur head off and i promise to be gentle ... And too much yada yada ... ! Over all ill give u a 3.5 ...

Bleedsfromeyeballs
BleedsfromeyeballsLv15Bleedsfromeyeballs

Not a bad concept but overall writing structure and typos really make it difficult to enjoy reading. Characters are under-described and chapter/paragraph layout is a mess. But I only went a few chapters in, it might become better later. If this story is rewritten I would pick it up again.

KingOlaf
KingOlafLv15KingOlaf

I like the story so far but why do I feel like the mc is falling to the sidelines and as in the new world will be in the woodenweelchair or the will he be using his legs since I doubt he will be much of a help movement wise in a forest or mountains and caves. And I figured he would be more long range damage dealer rather then support type little bit attack on the side and a pet that could be close or range combat or both and a defence on the side. But what feel missing the most is that the mc progresses the least of his friends as well as kana as thought u would steer her towards blood magic like in dragon age or that she could use the blood of the fallen beasts to heal her allies or in that sort , and i feel like Alice's spells are close to the cultivation like chinese novels. Other then that I like it's going so and I look forward too read more and see how the mc and the story progresses.

bradinar
bradinarLv14bradinar

The characters and the world creation are well developed. If you are reading in English then there are some grammatical errors that you will find. This story will pull you in and you will want more to read.

MrTheory
MrTheoryLv14MrTheory

It's a good story with an interesting idea I just feel like your drawing it out wayyyy to much I understand you want to explain everything to make it easier to understand but when you take over a month of uploading and 30 chapters and they haven't even started anything yet it gets boring I'm not trying to be over critical just giving my opinion I would suggest you doing longer chapters as to avoid using to many chapters and updates for a single concept

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