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The Clone Grand Commander (A Starwars FF)

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The story of a genetically superior clone trooper.

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Harry Potter World with Villain Choice System

I did not own some of the world settings, but the remaining is all my own creation. In any world there is no villain or protagonist instead there are people with various levels of luck and opportunities. The final winner among them becomes a hero or the protagonist while the remaining people that became the stepping stones for the protagonist become the villains. The villains are actually formed because of the mistakes of the so called good and peace loving people. ………….. A good man that was darkened by the seemingly good people became a villain. Finally after achieving his goals of revenge on the society he died happily while the people that killed him only has despair because of the after math. When he opened his eyes he was already 2 years old kid that got his head bumped. Most probably he died at that time and the soul of this villain replaced the kid. The most shocking thing is that there is a strange creature taking care of him. He has seen this creature in a movie in his previous life. Can’t villain see a movie with his mistress? This should be Kreacher. Immediately the memories of the kid returned to his mind. Immediately he understood he is the son of Sirius black and Mary Goldsman. He is called Jonathan black. He is currently in the black house under the care of his grandmother Walburga Black a pure blood enthusiast. “Ding, congratulations host you have obtained the villain choice system.” “Please make your first choice. Option 1: Push the blame of your injury to Draco Malfoy; you will be rewarded with 1000 gold Galleons. Option 2: push the blame to Crabbe and Goyle; you will receive +2 percent critical hit in everything you wanted.”

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GoldDragonMachina
GoldDragonMachinaLv15GoldDragonMachina

I love everything about this. Character is amazing, the build up is going great. Writing is crisp for the most part. This is a fic I want to see last until at least the end if the clone wars. Keep it going.

CosmicSkyNet
CosmicSkyNetLv13CosmicSkyNet

The story is great (in my opinion) and the concept of the mc being a clone commando is awesome. Writing quality is one of the best I’ve seen there are no grammar mistakes. Story development is pretty nice and it isn’t too fast or slow. It has a steady pace. Character development I can’t say too much since it’s only been 7 chapters but it’s a good. Update stability it’s fine. It doesn’t really the it but from the looks of it the update is one or two chaps a week. Overall 4.8 I say the author did a pretty good job on this story. Kudos to him and I hope he keeps writing this amazing fic and It will be top 50(or maybe top 10) in no time. Thank you for your time.

Wyatt_Fullmer
Wyatt_FullmerLv14Wyatt_Fullmer

this has alot of thought put into it. it gives good story development makes him strong but not end the universe strong there is thought put behind everything he does and designs it is a beautiful story I want and hope to see more with this amount of quality

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