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This is the beta testing server for my novel. Got a problem? Just say it. I will consider your opinion but I might not use it. If you have nothing helpful to say then don't comment. I won't write as my grammar is trash and I don't know how to express my idea into a story. Being a reader is more relaxing.

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Re: Evolution Online

On just another normal Monday, a new virtual reality game called "Evolution Online" launched out of nowhere and took the world by storm. People were blown away by the game’s hyper-realistic features and endless adventures. Everyone from small companies to big corporations and governments scrambled to get a foothold on this mysterious video game. But what they didn't know was that this game was actually a tutorial for the upcoming apocalypse that was about to hit the planet! The game was a precursor to the Earth's first evolution, where mana was going to be unleashed into the real world! Liam, a high school student who had faced numerous setbacks in his life, turned to 'Evolution Online' in the hope of changing his fate, but instead, he got trapped in the game's twisted world, and things went from bad to worse. When the apocalypse finally arrived, Liam barely managed to escape, but his situation didn't improve. Along with millions of others, he died a miserable death, unable to fight back and filled with regret. However, Liam's story didn't end there. He found himself inexplicably transported back in time before everything started! Armed with the knowledge of what was to come, Liam was determined to become the strongest and most powerful player, unleashing destruction upon the world that had ruined him before! This time, things were going to be different! ******************* Discord Link for chatting with author and character art https://discord.gg/XS7gWScKn8

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I just say i think שהדמות צריכה להיות לא בגוף ראשון) בתור התחלה זה לייט נובל) I think it's too direct right now and it sounds like you reading something is not like a story

howboutthat
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What is this plot and grammar 👎👎👎 honestly editor desperately needs a spell checker and you barely know anything about the mc yet he jumps way to far ahead without explaining a single thing to the readers like who is soul how old is he why is he the only active character I won’t be adding this to my library

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